Reviews for Spiral Traversed
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 13 . 5/23/2019
Hahahaha Orange you glad Naruto is gone.
TheWateringWizard chapter 12 . 12/23/2017
Hahahahaha that Omake with Orochimaru was hilarious ! I’d want to die too if I was him
TheWateringWizard chapter 11 . 12/23/2017
Kiba anally raped and liking it ?! Oh dear god please bleach my brain !
Yo chapter 17 . 12/22/2016
Just wanted to point out 1 thing, Hidan's power, isn't a bloodline or something that lasts forever, unless Vamio does all the rituals that Hidan does to keep his powers,(seeing as he revives them from an outside source) it's not going to work for him. Just a thought...
magicofantasy chapter 5 . 2/9/2015
Ok so in the letter she mentioned everyone except her father ,why not , he is an asholl and I 5hink Kurenai dosn't deserve it
I hope after her reunion with naruto hinata became stronger. ..I don't like the way she acted so far ...
Hinata wild prefer to be beaten but she would never abandoned naruto never
KyuKing115 chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Please continue the story! It is very good!
Lionheart chapter 10 . 11/20/2013
...women don't have breast milk until they're pregnant, that's why their breasts get bigger when pregnant.
KuroKanashimi chapter 7 . 4/4/2013
Hell No At the A/N at the Top WtH they left him & didn't even look for his Body & forgot about him... & he'll overlook it? The Fuck... Back too reading
KuroKanashimi chapter 4 . 4/4/2013
She Should Hate Her Father Also
Namegreatzumaki chapter 11 . 10/24/2012
Very nice
Sepherif chapter 12 . 7/25/2012
Well...that was crack-tastic. So many crossovers...
The SnKo chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
i didn't bother to finish the chap b4 typin this but holy shit they seriously 4got about Naruto holy cow my god thats funny as hell
ChibiNaruto3390 chapter 12 . 8/28/2011
great story so far and I think it would be kind of cool if you added in some characters from Soul Eater or Castlevania
Rain Addict CM chapter 22 . 8/7/2011
Pretty good story. Felt it was lacking something, I just can't tell what.
Kami no Itte chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Nice beginning. But please look over it again cos i found many typo's, grammatical and spelling mistakes. And I am not even a native english speaker, so that says a lot if even I notice them. But apart from that, nice story so far.
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