Rereading this just made me really want Ren and Kyoko to act in an angsty romance together. It'll be so perfectly natural.

This was just such a wonderful celebration and conclusion to the Dark Moon experience... Wow. My heart is full. *_* The improv with Ren and Kyoko is so intense (so wish we get more roleplays of those two acting intensely together..) and the bottle cap/screwtop thing is just such classic skip beat, as is Ren's desire to never let bottle caps near Kyoko again and Kyoko's reactions to the video where she sees Ren's care for her afterwards. Wonderful. I wish there was more.

It's bittersweet in my opinion. I enjoyed the skit, no doubt bur since Dark Moon arc was one of my favorite arcs, its like saying goodbye all over again.

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I LOVED IT. HILARIOUS AND I SWEAR I COULDNT STOP GIGGLING. UUUUUUGH FEEEELS AS WELL

Kyoko and Ren are so cute together, they're really sense though. They needed a good shove in the romantic direction.

God I love these two. You did a good job writing down their character :)

This was...A pretty amazing one shot. So full of melancholy, but of hope also. I absolutely love it. Now, I haven't checked your other stories yet (this I had just stumbled across) but I'm really hoping that you've done some sort of continuation of this -perhaps a director saw the skit and decides she's perfect for a role, etc etc.
Wonderful writing!

That was beautifulllllllllllll!

I know it's probably redundant... But will there be a sequel? Love it so much!

Fantastic. Wonderful work! I love how you did the acting between Ren and Kyoko! Interesting concept too, of all the different teams competing.

Aw, I really loved this. The scene that you made up for them was really great and just perfect for them. Nice job with this.

My stomach seriously hurts at the bottle cap part

this was a very good story. i was laughing so hard when she said that she choked on a bottle cap but then i felt really bad as i read on cause of the acting. some other reviews have said that this scenario would have fit right into the manga and a agree with them.

It's been a while since I've read sb fanfics, but they make me love sb even more. :) great little oneshot!

this was amazingly good n warm. excellent storyline! i think the way u wrote it makes the entire thing relatable, like i would want such a farewell too! and omg i literally burst out laughing at 3am reading kyoko getting choked by a bottle cap! that was innovative? HAHA! thanks for writing & i loved every single bit of it. cheers. (: