Reviews for The Napkin
Alice Loves Rock Music chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I love your fic :) So sweet ... Thanks for write this !
SciFiSiren2 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Nice, thanks for writing! I love that Daniel was the flirt this time, and you did a great job of writing their true emotions behind the jokes, and letting their real feelings shine. I thought it was totally in character and a fun and sweet read. :)
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Kyaaa! That was so awesome! So very cute and Daniel totally sounded tasty when he was flirting XD excellent job!
longnite chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Liked the view of Daniel being the one doing the flirting...and being more proactive. Very well played and a joy to read. Well done!
Rac80 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
very cute story, not out of character, just drunk. :P very good and enjoyable. I like Daniel teasing her. and the "just cuddling" sounds grand, I am sure Vala hasn't had a lot of simple affection in her life. :D
starjems88 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
great story:)
spacegypsy1 chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
cute, and D flirting...and playful. B
Ellebel chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Very lovely :-)

Sequel? ;)
BkWurm1 chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Oh how I adore your Vala and Daniel stories. You have such a wonderful mix of humor and tenderness in your writing and with this one, that little dash of angst makes the outcome all the more sweet and satisfying. A
skypilot-dlm chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
What a wonderfully sweet story! I really enjoyed it. I loved all the cuddling, and the playfulness between Daniel and Vala. I also liked the idea of them taking it slowly, it goes well with the story, well done.
MKRG chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
I liked this one a lot. It's one of the best DV hook-ups I've read in a long time. Thanks a bunch!
Stargate Fan chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
SWEET! A side of Daniel we never saw on TV.
ilna chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
that was just great - so cute and funny, with heartwarming moments as well. thanks!
acer-sigma chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
Ah nothing like a few drinks to loosen people up. And Daniel certainly seemed like he was loose. ;)

Plus nice job on rising some of Vala's insecurities, especially after Cam's inappropriate joke. I'm sure that'll come back to bite him at some point.

Enjoyed the cuddling between our favourite couple. Nice to see that they're taking things a bit slow. No doubt a new experience for Vala, and relearning experience for Daniel.

Got a kick out of Vala wanting to call that waitress at the end there. Half expected her to at least want to keep that napkin as a trophy or something. ;)
TheGoldenHum chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
I loved it! nicely written! :)
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