I have enjoyed pretty much all of these. I wasn't really a fan of the director ones but the rest have been really good and I think you have done an awesome job. I hope you continue to do this.

I thought this was adorable. You did a great job with this first chapter. I could really see/feel the characters.

Yay! They found the bookstore! Lucas isn't out of shape. He's just more of bench-presser than a gymnast.

Nice zing about the Sci-Fi. Yeah, if I were her I'd probably have enough with just living it, much less reading it. :)

Hee-hee! Short and sweet! I love it!

your writing still rocks! i can't wait to read more. oh and i read the comment about school and work and laziness, your not lazy believe me. peolpe need a break and sitting on the computer sometimes is not the best therapy! you rock!

Awesome job!

Hay, it's me again, love the drabble. It has such clairity, such emotion. I LUV IT! Please keep writing, I luv your work and I hope you get all those stories done without making your head explode!... No, seriosly take your time and try not to overload, I do not know what I woud do if I could not read your stories.

Uh, ok then, that was...interesting. Mabey you you sould stic to funny things. this story is kind of, heart throbing.

Not to afend you or any thing, but you are to good at making people CRY!

An interesting and different take on that scene, to have had Cybersix come back for her belongings and leaving that empty void for Lucas. _ Always a pleasure to read the interactions and non-interactions between those two.

If you wanted to see another approach to this part, check out the 'Aftermath' chapter of Ptah Aegyptus's 'Dr. Anthony Zacharias'. In fact, if you haven't read anything by him, read everything by him. I've found your word choice similar to his, and I'm pretty certain you'd like his work.

Keep 'em coming!

Wait... she meant that as a joke?

Oh well. Impossible to happened, but true.

Nice one Julian, better luck next time Jose...

(WHY DID SYPH REVIEWED FIRST!)

Aye, have to agree on the aftermath.

Honestly, why would Seity think that it can be in a Drabble?

(Mark: he got high on coffee, again)

Oh...

100 themes challenge huh? Interesting...

Well, Julian DID have a trick up his sleeve. Poor Jose, he got defeated (in a way)...

Try to add this in your possible themes:

Pain and Suffering

Tee-hee... Oh dear, I'm being a sadist again. Oh well, better focus this on Dani- you know who.

~Syphile

hi it's me again. I thought that story was should not be so hard on your self. You are one of the best writers I have read! I think you rock!

If you really want a challenge then I challenge you to write a story with all the characters in it, oh and make it funny...

If you can.

Just kidding, I bet you could do it with your hand tied behind your back. So if you don't want to do it because it would be to easy or something, than I do not blame you. But no matter what please keep writing.

Oh, I almost forgot thanks for taking my words to heart!

Hm, certainly a different approach than I had pictured but you certainly pulled it off well. Special love to the final paragraph and your choice of quotation.

Also: very interesting choice to explore the pre- and post-accident Adrian from an outsider's perspective. Certainly would've freaked the friends and family out. _

Good job! I await your next chapter with anticipation.

You captured her perfectly.

Yeah... she's just had a sugar rush that day and didn't know what she was typing... So was here Naga syndrome.

(you know what I mean)

Anyway, she asked me to relay her new request:

What happened after the last episode.

Pretty interesting huh? Considering Jose is still alive in the ending.

How Ironic...

Ring around the Rosie is reference to the black plague which caused death... seeing it used here.

Very nice one you got here.

(It's the actual Seityrn this time. Syp dragged me to watch C-6... Good show! Why did they end it so quick!)

Anyway... Keep it up. Expect more from you

PS: You can ignore Syphile's challenge to you