Reviews for Fireworks
lettucemid chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
WHAT A GREAT STORY! KEEP WRITING. KEEP WRITING! ;)
DarkAngel21 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Awww so sweet! I am a sucker for one-shots! I totally love this pairing not as much as Kisshu and Ichigo but ya know I still love Pai and Lettuce or Retasu or whatever you get my point!
True Colours chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
MORE ROMANCE NEEDED!

I thought the ending was the most beautiful part actually. I love it that he puts his arm around her and everything. A few minor errors, for example to instead of too, but nothing too serious.

A good line: ' “You aren't making fireworks or partying.” Pai pointed out bluntly.'

So pwiddiful (smooshy way of saying pretty)

Well done!

True
FictionalSandbox chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
AW!

SO CUTE! XD
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
That was perfect and it melted my heart... It's better than anything I can write, to be honest... Happy one whole month late new year, Duckie. :P
Booboo-nyaa chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
Love it. Poor Pai not being able to sleep in what is it...3 DAYS NOW!
chaosinthecosmos chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Love it. ]
easternrose21 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Aw, kawaii! It was very very kawaii!