| Reviews for Fireworks |
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lettucemid chapter 1 . 10/7/2010 WHAT A GREAT STORY! KEEP WRITING. KEEP WRITING! ;) |
DarkAngel21 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010 Awww so sweet! I am a sucker for one-shots! I totally love this pairing not as much as Kisshu and Ichigo but ya know I still love Pai and Lettuce or Retasu or whatever you get my point! |
True Colours chapter 1 . 8/2/2009 MORE ROMANCE NEEDED! I thought the ending was the most beautiful part actually. I love it that he puts his arm around her and everything. A few minor errors, for example to instead of too, but nothing too serious. A good line: ' “You aren't making fireworks or partying.” Pai pointed out bluntly.' So pwiddiful (smooshy way of saying pretty) Well done! True |
FictionalSandbox chapter 1 . 8/1/2009 AW! SO CUTE! XD |
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 1/31/2009 That was perfect and it melted my heart... It's better than anything I can write, to be honest... Happy one whole month late new year, Duckie. :P |
Booboo-nyaa chapter 1 . 1/17/2009 Love it. Poor Pai not being able to sleep in what is it...3 DAYS NOW! |
chaosinthecosmos chapter 1 . 1/1/2009 Love it. ] |
easternrose21 chapter 1 . 12/31/2008 Aw, kawaii! It was very very kawaii! |