| Reviews for FEAR of the ASYMMETRICAL black |
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lee770325 chapter 2 . 8/20 I know you may not make any updates, but you still want to think about this great article. You wrote the background and fantasy of kid very delicately. I really like the kid you wrote and he is confident Speaking and acting, he has been described in many articles as shy and introverted, very humane, but in my eyes kid is absolutely freak, he will do things that ordinary people can't do, ordinary people are very knowledgeable, and it is just like common sense to him. , I even hope he does something very stupid, very interesting! I really like the way Liz and Patti get along with kid that you described. It is very sweet, like family but different from family, and the love for each other in the ambiguity is exciting! When kid was asleep (reluctantly), they took care of him and didn't even leave him, my God! This is wonderful I really like the setting of the three of them sleeping together. It is not sex, but a pure love. I feel warm as I imagined in my mind. I hope Patti's sleeping appearance is not too bad. They leaned on each other on the train and felt comfortable with each other's close interaction. I really want to take a picture! ! This article was written in 2008, and now I can appreciate it is really lucky, even though he is not updating, this fantasy article is very good! My English is not good, the above is a google translation, please forgive me. |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/20/2016 oh my god! i'm revisiting my soul eater fandom years, and i found this story that i remember first reading not long after your last update! seven years later and i remember it pretty clearly even though it's short, and i was crushed to see you never came back to it. it's one of those with a really solid beginning that i'd have liked to have seen finished. i know you almost definitely won't return to this but i hope you at least see this review sometime and know that your stuff is excellent and still appreciated! love your smooth writing and consistent characterization. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2015 Oesg in vx ft the wshb put a another chapters |
ItsHoodButItsGood chapter 1 . 10/20/2015 Oh snap! Holy crap, I can't wait for the next one! |
Megan chapter 4 . 8/4/2015 I can't believe a story this good has been left unfinished for this long PLEASE UPDATE |
Kiryma chapter 4 . 7/25/2015 PLUZZZ UPDATE! Tbis is a good story that has been uncontinued for 6 years. PLUZZZZ! |
Frostyfall chapter 4 . 12/5/2014 This is amazing. That is all that is needed to be said. |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/28/2014 I know it had been a really long time, but PLEASE HAVE THIS CONTINUED! If you lost your muse or interest, that's understandable. What about leaving notes? Maybe another writer? ... ARE YOU EVEN ALIVE!? OH GODS! D: |
kaylia chapter 1 . 2/1/2014 Love it! |
PLEASE CONTINUE chapter 4 . 1/1/2014 Seriously man. This story is freaking good. Don't give up. |
waytheballbounces chapter 4 . 8/13/2013 If you are still out there, I love this story. Please, PLEASE, continue it, I'm begging you! |
Dark Lady of Silence chapter 4 . 7/24/2013 Wow, aren't you gonna to continue this?, it was getting really awesome!, please, if you already had the plot finish it, would you? |
thatonegreenpencil chapter 4 . 6/22/2013 This story is definitely the best Soul Eater story out there. You probably stopped updating because of a personal reason, maybe you've given up on this story entirely. That's fine; I respect that. When you decide to update again, I'll be a dedicated follower. Hope to get an update from you soon. |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/27/2013 Come on finish I've been waiting soooo long! |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/20/2013 Argh! Such a wonderful story... and you stop here?! *cries* |