what is their relationship *glares* ( i know it might say later in the story but right now i'm on chap. 1)

I really hate it when people like you mess everything up with passion. Hitsugaya and Hinamori grew up as some sort of siblings together in the same household with their grandmother for years and not only that he is way younger then Kuchiki so you made Hinamori into a paedophile with a sick fetish for very small little boys that lived under the same roof as each other. I know they are not really siblings by blood but it has been said in series two that when they go to the soul society they form families. There is a Bleach official character book explaining everything about it before the series came out that they have some sort of sibling relationship.

:D GREAT STORY!

nice nice nice!

YES! I was waiting for the "We're already dead." line.

You did not disappoint.

Loving it.

But there's something missing between these two chapters.

Three hours later Matusmoto collapsed on her bed. She had never been on such a feast. And they had actually gotten her some sake. This was a school she

"Who knew that old man was so well fit. I'm so tired but he didn't even break a sweat," she mumbled. "And I still have to get up early tomorrow..."

Uh... That's extremely suggestive if you have no idea what the previous sentence is.

Holy crud. Is this review 100?

Yay! Tell me this is going to be a one where Gin is nice. Because I honestly felt happy when he poisoned Aizen in the manga, and said he was pretending to follow him the entire time.

"Matsumoto's head pooped out from the hole."

FUNNIEST TYPO EVER. lol i was literally cracking up for a good ten minutes before I could keep reading haha xD great story so far, can't wait for more :p

umm hi. I want to say sorry about this even though it must have happened ages ago. But I wanted to say sorry because it is really sad. ummm...thank you for writing such a great story

wow white! this is so good! it's short, but it was soo well written! i'm looking forward to reading more of your stories!

~Kali

GOD-FUCKING-DAMMIT! why are th golden trio such jerks in this fic?

"They have to be lying. And here I thought we got some nice people, but once again, they are scumbags!" Hermione was feeling like she had been kept away from something she should have known."I hate to not know what's going on! And I thought they were nice people and then they just yell at us!"

bloody hermione! and i actually liked her in this fic...*scoff*

i'm going on a harry-bashing spree here but i am seriously hating the way he is portraied in this fic.

'He didn't want to be protected by some Muggle.'

god, that line made me want to punch him in the face. who says muggles are better than wizards?

i love this but harrys acting like a stupid brat and i hope he sees that hes not as good as he thinks he is

Awesome! you tied it together just right!

When Ichimaru said, "Because we're already dead," I pictured him saying it very cheerfully for some reason.