So nice how you continued their story. I know it takes a talent to write (which I don't have), but it is so disappointing when stories are left hanging or unfinished. You did a great job of taking us through their pain to a happy conclusion. I've only started reading these stories in 2019 and I noticed you haven't written in many years. I encourage you to do more as you are very talented. Thank you for the stories, they are wonderful!

Loved it. Read them all in 1 night.

great story . I really liked it. :)

Oh, I LOVE it that Smallville - the town, the place, the memories, is what convinces her. That's epic!

Perfect line: "Just come back."

And... now I'm finished with the series. What am I supposed to do now?

good chapter & more please

We all know they will have a revelation scene sometime in their lives together that she will remember, if they ever do have one on the series I hope that it will be something like this. You wrote both of them perfectly in character. I love how she reassures him and gets through to him that nothing has changed.

Wow! Loved this one even better! I totally agree with the other feedbacks- you write a really good Clois fanfic- so much better than some smallville episodes!

Love your Lois & Clark dialogue:

"God! What I wouldn't give for that power sometimes."

"Well, if you had super hearing right now, you'd probably only hear my heart beating."

"You are such a sap, Smallville. Anyway, I don't need super hearing for that. I can feel it...It's probably not beating as fast as mine, though."

"Do you always have to win?"

"I thought you'd be used to it by now."

I just finished reading your stories so far and especially loved how they all followed on from the previous one so easily. They were wonderfully written and I only wish the shows writers had of done something similar with the episodes after Bride. It would have been very special.

I read the first part and I was so worried! It just broke my heart. I'm so glad that there was a sequel!

Chloe was adorable in the first part. I like her pushing Clark along ... I can imagine her being really supportive.

I like how you write Lois and Clark ... from the revelation of the secret to Lois finding him and them making up ... it was all just perfect.

And the ending made me smile so much. Those two are just so meant to be.

Wonderful job! :)

Your series is great. I hope you write more. Have you ever thought of writing a complete Clois in style of 1990's show Lois and Clark the new adventures of superman? I think you'd do a great job starting with their first meeting at the Planet and the courtship/denial then falling in love. Just skip Lois's relationship with Lex Luthor.

That was so sweet! God, I loved their confession/speeches. It was so heartfelt. You really represented the depth of their feelings well. I love all your Clois one-shots. Great Job! :)

you are brilliant! awesome!

I love love LOVE this little series so far. Great work, and I can't wait for more! :)

this was a great series of stories, and even though I know you said it would be a while. I really hope you change your mind. may the writing gods strike you with so many ideas that you have no option than to post more stories.

This is so sweet,I love it! it really is such a joy to see Clark and Lois like story really made my heart so happy.I am looking forward to read more of your work.