And I love the way you incorporate scripture from the Bible too. Every place you do I very fitting.

Wow! This was great. Wonderful piece. Awesome. It was funny too, even though I think Edmund would have a less desirable reaction to the snow(or more favorable for us, since we all love sibling angst, fluff, love, and bonding). Truth be told, I wonder how a match between Lucy and the rest would go, since here she's really good. Nice work! :) :D

This was fantastic. It was wonderful to see a different take on the coming of winter - Edmund's laughter, and his decision to leave it all in the past. I very much enjoyed this.

Thanks for writing!

I love how you incorporate Scripture!

I liked this pretty much, very sweet indeed.. Thanks for sharing.

Hahahaha I love the snowball fight :) and I like Edmund's little passage at the end. Good job with this one. Your writing is clearly improving here :)

I was hoping Edmund would react like that. I'd want Lucy on my team too. This was a good One-Shot. :)

That's a great story! Love how you described them all! And that Lu was picking off the line of advancing sock beating servants. That is perfect for her.

The only battle the High King lost? Well, he certainly chose the right one to lose.

I sympathise with Peter. 9 is much to early to be woken by a hyper younger sister to play in the snow. Personal experience. In case you wanted to know, 6 is too early to be woken to open presents... Nine-year old sister, and this happened just after her birthday.

I love what's scribbled in the margin by ERP.

-Dyslexic Nerd

Awww... I loved this. :) Susan and Peter so worried about how Edmund would react to the snow; Lucy utterly oblivious, throwing snowballs. lol

Lucy getting Peter twice was hilarious!

And I particularly liked the end, where Edmund grabs Lucy and says that she is on his team. The sibling bonding is great!

Altogether an enjoyable story and I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Nice and funny...

"And so, the first and only battle High King Peter the Magnificent had ever lost was recorded by an amused scribe..."

:)-Caity

HAHAHA! :D I LOVE IT!

This story made my day! :) Making me smile and laugh... although my class is kinda wondering what the heck I'm doing... but NO WORRIES! :D

BRILLIANT STORY!

I'm reviewing 'cuz I want those cookies! :) Oh, and I liked the story. ;) I thought it was funny how Edmund put his older siblings in their place, but neat that they were worried about them anyway. Nice work!

Great story! I seriously love your word choices: the clock got exiled to the hall! _

Thank you for sharing this!

Aww! That's great! It gives hope to those who have been born again but still remember the death that is sin. Thank you.

Nice! I like it! And I think it's neat how you ended with a play on a Bible verse! That's a great verse and I so easily recognized it! (I am born-again Christian)

Thanks for writing...keep it up-For the Aslan in our world!