I guessed the ending but still feel sad about it. But of course I like this.

...and in the film he said to Harry in the memory of the Mirror: "Being sentimental?"
But what about his own sentimental moments? He was always so composed and rational.
Thank u for depicting his sentimental moments.

Okay, this is the only story which is reasonably reasonable and not crazy. Nice one, I am reading all of your stories and I guess I am going to put you in my favourite list and hope that none of my relatives stumble upon my favourite list and disinherit me for reading your slash stories at the tender age of 14...

Beautiful. And so very sad. Thank you for writing and sharing!

This just broke my heart. Bring on the feels.

Oh.
I feel really sad, now.

Beautifully done.

That was wonderful
it made me cry

Awwwwww. Sob

I don't cry, but this made me cry anyway. It's so beautiful and tormenting and haunting... and completely believable. Thank you.

Cried at this one. Bloody. Cried.

Awwww... (BuzzKill)

But so true! First yeah HP there must have been a queue to see into the mirror between Harry and Snape, lol. :D

This was so sad but I really liked it. I feel really sorry for Severus. You did a great job at making it really true to his character.

*Also the category you have put it in at the top I think it's the wrong Lily, you might get more readers if you put it in Lily Evans.P :)

beautiful

Wow. This is just amazing! I feel sorry for Severus.

This is beautiful :)

It definately shows Snape's softer, more passionate side and how it differs from his bitter personality throughout the HP series. I'm really glad you wrote this and I definately see a possible career as a writer for you!