Oh, poor Demyx... This a really sweet piece and you really feel for the characters. I like it and its beautifully melancholy tone. Well done.

I've never read a story like this one before :D

It's really good. The ending was actually very unexpected and fit perfectly with the plot of the story and it tied in with the game :)

~Liseyy

That was really great work! I nearly cried while reading this! I felt bad for both Demyx and Axel. Hope you don't mind me faving! ;)

Oh, and belated merry Christmas and happy new year!

P.S.

I hope it isn't rude to ask if you'd read and reviewed my stories. Thanks! Even if you don't it'll be OK.

I didn't find the ending lame at all. This was a lovely one-shot. I was always wondering if anyone would've done something for Axel after he left, and I could just imagine that being Demyx. I like that part in the beginning, about why Axel is his best friend. It amused me.

I kind of wish that there were more instances of Demyx trying to cheer Axel up, only so that the Roxas counter hadn't gone up so fast, but I won't complain. This was a great read.

X3 !

I loved it! Especially the reasons why Demyx wasn't friends with any other of the orginization members.