Reviews for Five Things That Did Not Happen To Penny
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
aaaaaaaaaa ohmygod this is so good i love it you did amazing aaaaa
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
The problem with the last scenario is that Captain Hammer can't be hurt by ordinary means. The only time he felt pain was when Death Ray exploded in his hands. So the only thing Penny could hurt is her own leg.
Polaneva chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
:D I believe I'm the 100th fav of this amazing story!
zaywex chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
I don't know if you're still around to receive this but thank you so much for sharing this fic.
Mint Pearl Voice chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
This is incredible. I'm all teary now. If only!
Lee Aemilius chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Awwwww... These were so sweet.
PaddySnuffles chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Aaaaawww! XD You should expand on these, they're so good! (not to mention cute and fluffy, just the way I like it... ;D)
starzinyourskye chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Okay, this is absolutely adorable xD And there's a little ping of nostalgia within me with each scenario - 'cause, God, I wish they could have happened xD The shy and broken touch you give Billy/Dr. Horrible is simply heartbreakingly fitting I definitely enjoyed this read _
GraspingBlu chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
totally cute and i wanted those things to happen!

and then she goes and says 'dont worry captain hammer will save us!'

great story!
UndergroundDaydreams chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Very sweet - I liked it. Poor Billy never could get a break - the villain that's really the good guy, and he finally gets the girl - all thanks to fan fiction. ;) Thanks for sharing!
irezel chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
D: i like your ideas...:)
Christatheman chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Aww! That was so nice! Not my usual, but nice. XD

If only, if only.

Good job. I can't wait to see what happens in the second season. Hey, in a world full of superpowers, anything's possible. Maybe they can bring Penny back. I hope they'll do something more with her character; Dr. Horrible just wouldn't feel right without Felicia Day in the cast.

I like how you gave different scenarios, instead of a string of things that happened in the same story line. It generally annoys me when authors change details of the story, and then continue on like the story would continue as it did. Taking the individual scenes and altering them was good.

You could probably use a beta-reader, for grammatical errors, but overall it was cute and well-written.

Thanks for 5 mini-happy-endings. )
Larissa Fae chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
Oh, this was nice. I really enjoyed it.
aclassicistkitten chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
So sweet. It made me cry but in that good why like happy tears, tears of joy.
Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
Loved it. If only any one of those had happened, hey? Especially the last one. Well-done, in character and interesting. I especially liked the very first one where he actually does say that he oves her hair! :D

~Red
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