All I can say right now is that you are supremely INCREDIBLE and the characters of everyone are also. I also agree with you on how the Mudblood incident went and I am sort of glad that Lily had to learn that she couldn't just walk into her sister's body and take over her sister's life while also shredding and remodeling it into mostly her previous life without consequences. Lily will have to save Vernon's life at least a bit otherwise Sirius really will be a Muggle-murderer and witch murder and possibly a dark wizard. If anyone else tried to write this story they would have damaged the character of Lily into a bit of a dark witch so I applaud your skill in making her realistic.
(I'm much older than Lily and I couldn't handle what she's handling. My mom might have and basically did.)

OMG this is highly original and very well written

It's good u abandoned this story.. It's so meaningless that I quit it... Lilly is so stupid... OK!... she killed her dieing sister and took our her body for her boy... Then what she is doing turning Veron and duds lift upside down... She is making a mess of the house and creating a fussy Harry... And know planning to join wizarding world... Oh so good Albus is Soo good to leave her baby whom she came back for ...on her magic hating sister's door step on a cold night... So she understood him totally...
Just because Lilly is Harry's mother doesn't mean what she is doing or done is right... I don't agree... I quit and it's good to know even you quit this disaster...

On the contrary: I feel Sirius' actions are completely in character for him. His primary personality traits are his loyalty and his temper. Vernon attacked Lily, and Sirius' mother was verbally abusive (and possibly physically, as well), making his attacks completely canon-Sirius in nature.

Oh, please, PLEASE continue this! It's so well done! You've taken Sirius's impulsivity and Azkaban-induced madness to it's logical end, kept Vernon and Marge ic, introduced a bit of Petunia's background through her friends, given logical explanations for Dudley and Harry's natures, and painted a realistic, not perfect but understandable, relatable and likable Lily.

And bonus! She's going to clear the air with her childhood friend! Much making-up, please.

I love it. Please, if nothing else, post a plot-outline for us, eh?

Now I know this story hasn't been updated in 7 years, but I really hope you can find it in your heart to continue. Seriously, the plot and characterization is wonderful and it is very well written. You have no idea how many stories I've dropped because of poor grammar and spelling.

I also love Lily to death and I wish there were more quality stories about her out there. I also love the concept of Lily surviving Halloween night and raising Harry on her own. You've definitely set up an interesting and realistic take on that idea.

So please, if you could find it in your self, please consider continuing your story. Because my heart breaks when I find a gem like this that was left unfinished.

AWESOME! I love your story. XD Also I think that Lily should move out. Please update quickly.

I love this story; you can't imagine my dismay when I realized it was abandoned! And at such a cliffhanger too.
I'm putting it at my alert list in the hopes that one day, someday, you'll take it up again. If you do, you know many many of us readers will be waiting for you. So please, could you please start writing this story again?
I like your characterization of Lily, I think it's very realistic. Poor Lily, imagine realizing abnormalities in both her kids; it would be hard enough while living a normal life, but she's going through a divorce, harboring a fugitive who really is a murder, oh and let's not mention possessing the body of her dead sister.
Please please update soon, I really want to see the scene with Severus!
Thanks
xx

I love how this is going so far!

I love how you're dealing with Sirius and frankly think your take on it is far more realistic than Rowling's, considering he was technically psychologically tortured for years not simply imprisoned though I'd guess that wouldn't help either.

Wow, this is building up, and I can see the shouting match that comes when Severus learns just what Lily did. I doubt he will be happy in her taking over someone else's body after all.

Wow, that was harsh but there are guys that do that when they divorce their wives, and now women do the same thing. It was more men back in the day which is why there are laws in divorce cases in some states that basically freeze joint accounts so that they cannot be drained by either party. Nor can insurance be canceled by only one party on a joint insurance because of this kind of thing being done.

As for Sirius, wow, just wow he is not playing around here, he is being very violent and even killing people, not too bright on his part.

Very nice, so many changes, and now Vernon is out of the picture. The remodeling was needed too.

Oho Lily is fully taking over here, and there is one who knows who she really is.

Wow, this is realistic and I love how the community came to her aid in helping her. One two year old is a handful, two at once? You really have to have the patience of a saint!