This is so sad and so beautiful.

How is it that you can write tragedy so very beautifully?

One reason I really love this one and some of your other stories is how abrupt they are. You never know when you are going to die, ergo, you never known when you've lived half of your life.

Oh, break my heart a little more.

Beautiful

So, so good. Thank you for the brilliant little fic.

It's beautiful.

What a a sad little collection, war robs everyone, even the survivors

oh my god! my eyes started leaking :/

This is...amazing. I have no words to describe it. It's such a clever way of writing that I never even thought existed. And I love how in some of the stories, the names aren't mentioned, but I can easily and perfectly figure it out. Brilliant idea. I'd love to see what else you have.

All the lonely people, where do they all come from...
All the lonely people, where do they all belong...

Brilliantly done.

I've been going through your stories all night and i've left more reviews for you than i think i have for anyone else. Its just that i feel that i have to express how amazing your writing is, and how perfectly you can encapsulate tragedy.
I guess what makes this story so tragic, is that they have no idea how brave they are and how brave they'll become.

ohmygod so sad :(
Totally gorgeous though

This is amazing. The halving thing read brings about the poignancy of all these young death. Also the irony you put into a lot of them was very cool. Really well-written. Write more soon!

Very, *very* cool idea.

Really interesting, I liked it a lot.