Awe it finally happened Tom and Laurie fell in love. You need to make a second part to this

Omg this story I amazing

I just got to the end! Please don't stop writing! I'll die!

this is really good, update soon !

Well, this was'nt the best chapter but I hope to read more chapters from you!

hey !im looking forward to see the next chapter!

oh ,you havent updated this fiction for a long time ,so sad:(

this chapter is interesting ,please update&update!

Oh wow!

I completely forgot about this story until now

i can't believe i did that!

good thing once i started reading it that it all came bak!

Love ur 'Oreo' character!

lol

until next chapter then!

TOOK YA LONG ENOUGH! ok, sorry, got that bit of meanness out of mah system... GREAT JOB, I LOVED IT! more soon, bitte!

stupid site won't let me review the other chappies... gr... anyway, when will there be more of this? wanna read more!

this is amazing... and i think i may have said that before but... yeah, my brain is slowly crawling upstairs to bed, so ima just gonna say that i can't wait for next installment of this, and that i can't spell for crap... yeah... great job and update asap, ja?

Hey, this is a really good story! I hope you update it soon, I'd like to see what happens next!

hiya,

i love ur story, please update soon, i cant wait for more

'-Scene Kid-'

this is good. i love it. i would read more but i have parental controls going off can you send them to me?