Reviews for An Organ of Fire
eterna-romantica03 chapter 4 . 5/28
As excuses go, leaving Hermione because of a possible, imagined threat from Voldemort is kind of... silly. But the dust hadn't even settled when Harry and Hermione had sex and he was still a child/young man traumatised and scared so, I'll let that go. Not answering letters, that is selfish. Not answering letters, show any interest in the people and the world he left behind? What the hell Harry! He was so concerned about Hermione's safety that he ignored the world he left behind? That, I don't buy. One would assumed that Harry would have kept with news from the Wizarding world if he was so worried about the return of Voldemort. Besides, Hermione would have been in danger whether in a relationship with Harry or not. She is Muggleborn, she is a fighter and she would not stand by while people are hurt. So, dear Harry, as much as I love you, you are full of crap.
Elena
eterna-romantica03 chapter 2 . 5/26
Well crap! Men whether real or fictional have a knack to make everything about themselves, don't they? I just hope I can still like Harry after all is said and done. I did enjoy Hermione's characterisation. She sounded like the Hermione I've learned to love and admire.
Elena
eterna-romantica03 chapter 1 . 5/24
Okay, sounds promising. I love Harry, the mother in me can't help it. An abused, abandoned, manipulated boy deserves a break. I adore Hermione. I like Ron sometimes. Curious where this story goes. There's obviously a child Harry knows nothing about. Why is the big question.
Heirofgryffiodor chapter 25 . 1/20
I love you.(if u'r a boy, no homo but if u'r a girl then...)
Guest chapter 25 . 5/15/2019
Very good.
I only wonder what is hermione's last name now? weasley-potter or mrs potter etc..
And i wanted a conversations of harry's fears/doubts/reasons why he left to hermione.
Strange though weasleys are so potent about making baby's, and ron never could in a decade weird?
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25/2019
Damnnn...
dude356 chapter 25 . 11/15/2018
This is the most engrossed I've been in a story in a while. I read the whole thing in one shot. The twist with the villain was one of the more creative twists I've seen in a fic and the potion that Sirius and Hermione were dosed with legitimately freaked me out, especially when it was revealed what the antidote would do to a pregnant Hermione. I don't envy Harry for the choice he had to make there and I don't blame Hermione for initially acting cold towards him after she realized the choice he'd made.

I will say that the whole "Harry and Hermione have a one-night stand and then one of them abandons the other for years without so much as a note, Hermione ends up pregnant, and Harry doesn't find out until the kid is a decade old when something totally random brings them back together" storyline still isn't my favorite, but at least you went a different, interesting way with it by having Hermione eventually marry Ron and treat Harry Jr. as if he's Ron's kid.

Anyway, this was a really good story and I really enjoyed reading it.
themadmartian chapter 25 . 10/1/2018
This was probably one of the Finest written stories I've in awhile.
I'll add this to my story favorites.
0))
potato chapter 2 . 3/4/2018
POTATOES
NAMIKAZEMINATO.7799 chapter 25 . 3/1/2018
U know what? i am at a loss of words here!. really, even now, when the official series is over, i think u did a better job. let me shut up now before i start writing a book on U. HAT'S OFF [_]
lazy-kaa chapter 3 . 10/5/2017
Hm. strange decisions. What will be different, if Harry finds the trough? OK. It makes difference for Ron's memory, but it is nothing to do with relations with Hermione and his son. Well, let's see, what will be next.
sambayar chapter 25 . 9/23/2017
wow... a brilliant beautiful story... awesome writing
Guest chapter 25 . 8/9/2017
Stumbled across this today and haven't stopped reading in five hours. I truly hope by now you are an author or something is very wrong with the world. Brilliant. (A 39 year old who has read many many many books and should have spent the time doing grocery shopping but could not stop reading this from Australia)
projectjay chapter 1 . 5/2/2017
Adding to favor stoey
BlackRose207 chapter 25 . 4/12/2017
Nice one...
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