Plz update soon!

This is truly, truly beautiful! :) i think you've kept them perfectly in character, and the way you've shown Renesmee when she's older is absolutely inspired! Can't wait for you to continue! :)

intrstng! cant wait 2 c wat hapns nxt w/ ness n beth.

I liked it very much, very well put together and nicely written, but please finish writing it! put up Edward's reaction or something!

It was very interesting. i really hope you're goint to continue this.

omg this is so good please write more soon

This is really good so far!

Will we get Nessie and Edward's conversation next?

I like it - Edward/Ness father/daughter stories are one of my faves, and yours is written very well. Poor Beth. I look forward to more!

this is fantastic! definately keep it coming, I really am anticipating the conversation between nessie and edward

Very good. You write very well. Good backstory. I can't wait to read more. There will be more right! ;)

Nessie's hair colour should be the same as Edward's but with Charlie's curls

Oh yes please continue, me likey lol

I liked that a lot! You should deffiniatly post soon. Please! Lol, but yea, you are a good writer :).

oh my goodness i love it! please write more asap... please