I love it!

love

Lol. I really like Thanatos, he just to cool. An update is needed immediately! Please!

Dun,dun,dun! Oh snap! What's gonna happen next!

this is soooooo awesome u should write more i want to know how it ends!

Where did you learn to write that like? I must admit, that was a very well-written story. I hope this is not too short for I can't think of any other compliments!

This is a really good story, is there any chance of it being continued.

plz update soon! I really like demeterHades

plz update soon!

I hope you update soon - I like your take on the Hades/Persephone story, its different to the generic kidnap stories and Hades has a real element of darkness to him with the use of his vengeance. Happy writing :)

intriguing...I like it

please update when you can, hopefully soon! i think this is a fantastic peice and hope that i can read more soon!

i had my doubts about the story summary but its nice

I think you're doing a wonderful job in writing this story. This is one of my favorites from mythology and I like what you're doing with it. I like the way you're representing all of the gods and your writing style is really nice. I'm enjoying it greatly and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Well, I kind of know, but you've added enough of your own twists that make it really interesting to read.

So thanks for writing and keep up the good work!

ow poor demeter! Zeus is so cruel! And hades wasnt too nice either:-P but good chapter, i cant wait for more so update soon!