lolz at the end "shit."

Great beginning. RakiClare, A quarter Yoma and a half Dragon. The organization ought to have an interesting reaction to Raki. Hell the rest of the rouge claymores should have an interesting reaction. Anyway I'm looking foreward to the next chapter. If you need a beta, I'm really good at grammer, and people often get annoyed at spelling errors, but I digress, point is I could be a pretty good beta.

wow a half dragon? why is it that in the anime it didnt mention the outer world or the dragons

This is one sweet Claymore fic, the only other one's I've seen and liked was one where Raki willingly became a Yoma so he could be strong enough to protect Clare. So will the seven other claymore ladies, besides Clare, become a harem for the new Dragon Raki?

Good beginning !

Please hurry up with next chapter.

Alright, this looks like a promising start. :) A few things I'd like to mention though:

1) What's with the extremely short sentences? I noticed this immediately, and it makes the text a bit abrupt at times. The grammar and spelling is otherwise quite good, but I think you could apply some subordinate clauses to lengthen and combine your sentences - it'll look better. :)

2) As this seems to be quite heavy an A/U, you have some explaining to do later on. Like why is Clare fighting Ophelia, the reason she was separated from Raki, only now seven years after their first encounter? And why isn't Priscilla with Raki, especially since he seems to have been with Isley in this story? Why is Miata with the ghosts and not Clarice, and why are they hunting Isley instead of the Org, etc.

Get these sorted out and I'm sure this story will be even better later on. :)

Moonlith