What a story too bad it never goes further, really wanted to know cause it only was going to be better.

Incredibly disappointing. Not just because it’s abandoned – and that is really sad – but because it is not nearly as good as it should have been. The premise is fantastic, shame that it turned into an unresolved angstfest.

good chapter
however when harry apologised, it didn't seem fair. it was also hermonies fault for not talking to him so he shouldn't have had to appologise alone
can't wait to see what happens next

You had an interesing idea for a story, but the execution leaves a lot to be desired. There are about two hundred flashbacks too many. Yes, flashbacks are part of good storytelling, but you rely on them so much that the reader can't tell what's going on. In addition, your characters aren't believable. Hermione knows Harry's handwriting, so why does she think that the letter is from? Why would she not talk to him? Why would Neville turn against Harry when Harry did nothing but support him? Why did Hermione all the sudden have superpowers in a duel? There are too many inconsistencies!

Who is we?

"...we found Helga's Cup..."

Why wouldn't Luna speak to Harry for months? Okay, she wanted to know what was going on with Ron, but to not to speak to Harry who is one of the only people who would speak to her is insane. I don't think you've thought this story through.

I'm confused.

"Over a year passed since that day, the day when I lost everyone."

Which day? The day Sirius died? The day on the train? The day of the letter? And, if it was a year, then what did he do for that year if he didn't go back to Hogwarts until a year later? This is all very cofusing.

great chapter, will you be finishing this?

""I buried my wife less than a week after getting married. I was forced to kill her when Voldemort possessed her and I could do nothing else. And in turn, I was murdered by my twin..." A seventeen year old Harry said, a tinge of red colouring his bangs."

The end of unsung hero was profoundly messed up. Profoundly.

Were all of the Harry's drawn from particular fan fics?

I think I've read a story which had an insane Dark Lord Harry resurrecting Hermione.

interesting story, planing any updates?

ok 17 chapters in under an hour god bless coffe

this is an amazing fic

beautiful imagry

great gramma

this is a great story! CLIFFHANGER! _ i wonder if you are still planning to update? :D

Really wish you would finish this story - great concept

Wow a really good story. I really hope you continue with it because I am finding that good Harry/Hermione stories are few and far between.

The only critique I have is your use of "white eyes with lightning at the corners". Harry is powerful I get it, but no reason to start giving images of Storm from X-men.

loving it continue