Dude! He is good :P

Derren Brown trick lol! Good one. Patrick would have beaten him though so good job on the tickets.

this story is so sweet and funny and entertaining every time that i read it.

VERY nice!

What great "non-denominational holiday" story for *The Mentalist*.

Well done.

You got the voices but this BMX thing is Derren Brown. He did it with Simon Pegg. Hmm, not exactly original...

Very good. Did you get the idea for the story from Derren Brown? I swear he did something very similar with Simon Pegg. But yeah, very very good. And funny too, and so exactly what Jane would do.

haha :) Very cute! I really liked the story!

OMG this is bleedin' brilliant, you got Patrick Jane and Rigsby down perfectly, I can see this happening on the show, great work, loved the ending! :-D

Ha! Ha! I love it! This really got me in the holiday spirit! At first I thought the bike thing was a grammatical error, but then it happened again... AMAZING, FUN STORY!

Haha, cute story! Poor Rigsby, he's way out of his league.

I really enjoyed reading this! I thought your characterization was good and you really captured the dynamic Jane has with the rest of the team.

Very festive and wonderful incorporation of a Darren Brown trick!

very cool story :) nice darren brown trick and i always knew rigsby was a hockey guy :D

Cute. I'd be pleased if you'd write another Mentalist fic. You're very good at coming up with tricks. ;D

Cheers,

Kirsten

Hahahahahaha that was great. Loved it.