That was so cuuuuuuute! Love this one!

Cute. I would love to see more.

I think its sweet that himura allows sena to use his shoulder as a pillow then he puts his arms around him thats so hot! 3 3 Great read!

I love picturing the two sleeping together XD Them fighting over who would wake them up was funny too. I loved this :3

I liked it w it was well written, and I loved the part where they were fighting over who should wake them. Cuuute (**) And welcome to the world of Eyeshield 21, where I hope you'll stay XD

Oh crap. Just realized that this was written in 2008. Guess I should be the one welcomed XP

... Give him candy! 8D! jkashgjasda, the follow-up oneshot should be about the candy in their shared room oAo ahahhaa, sorry, pervertedness over! And it was a lovely oneshot, thanks for writing it! 3

omg i wish there was more so kawaii!

(idk if i already commented, so yeah...) this is so cute! plz write more?

LMBO! sena's THATS NOT CANDY! hahaha so this was abosolutley cute,u should deffinitly go on with this..but then again i duno how long ago u submitted this..i tend to be rather late i reckon..wish yall would make these good storys longer,geez..wat a tease hehehe..

hahaha I like your fanfic.. so funny~ and so romantic~ hahaha..

I can't imagine Hiruma answered Sena calmly.. hahaha.. XD~

aw~ really I like your fanfic!

I like your story and you really should do the sequel.

*thumb up* Sweet! He did it, Hiruma-kun did it! Yep, it's a good idea for Sena and Monta to change seat 'cuz I don't wanna see Monta slept with Hiruma-kun, okay? Hahaha!

did you ever finish the sec-squeal! lolz

*cough* apologies for the lame pun

CUTE

i think hiruma was sad/hurt about wat sena had said

lol i like the little thing at the end

hm i wonder wat hiruma had for sena, i have a pretty good idea

of what it might be *spaces out and gets a slight nose bleed*

Lol cute story, Cant wait for the fallow-up