| Reviews for Itex's Secret |
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alwaysdonuts chapter 8 . 12/17/2008 i just read this story for the second time i still love it XD |
alwaysdonuts chapter 9 . 12/17/2008 what? but i was lving this story! u can't end it yet! NO! X( |
the7thflockmember chapter 8 . 12/15/2008 :) |
melissaeverlasting chapter 8 . 12/15/2008 INTERESTING! Truthfully, I'd believe anything about Jeb's allegiance at this point. Good chapter! :) -Melissa |
Serenity.Jones chapter 8 . 12/14/2008 Good filler chapter, though its kinda short. |
melissaeverlasting chapter 7 . 12/13/2008 Which might be a problem, LOL. Great chapter! -Melissa ) |
Serenity.Jones chapter 7 . 12/13/2008 heh... I loved that last part, " Oh, I can destroy the world if I want to." best line yet! |
Taeniaea chapter 6 . 12/10/2008 great story |
the7thflockmember chapter 6 . 12/9/2008 :) this is good! more! :) |
the7thflockmember chapter 5 . 12/7/2008 NO! FANG! |
Serenity.Jones chapter 5 . 12/7/2008 stupid people who think kids cannot fly... grr... and poor fang! yet,I also feel sorry for Max, whenever that button turns on she wants to kill the flock. WHich I think is kinda sad. |
melissaeverlasting chapter 5 . 12/7/2008 It better not be! Anyway, good story. It's interesting and you've got Max's voice pretty well. -Melissa |
Serenity.Jones chapter 4 . 12/6/2008 poor Iggy. hey is this like a remake of the AE? Cause if it is, then it makes perfect sense! |
the7thflockmember chapter 4 . 12/6/2008 ahh, yes, so they did forget about her. poor gazzy, and nudge... and ANGEL! EVERYBODY'S FAVORITE BABY! NO! so... that was good, but definitely very, very tragic and sad. |
Serenity.Jones chapter 3 . 12/6/2008 So I read your other story (this one) and you know what? You have an amazing idea with this story. The plot, what is that? Also: Chapters are a smidget short and by adding details you fill in that extra length that is needed. So good job and all that fun stuff. I can't wait to read more. |