Reviews for Itex's Secret
alwaysdonuts chapter 8 . 12/17/2008
i just read this story for the second time i still love it XD
alwaysdonuts chapter 9 . 12/17/2008
what? but i was lving this story! u can't end it yet! NO! X(
the7thflockmember chapter 8 . 12/15/2008
:)
melissaeverlasting chapter 8 . 12/15/2008
INTERESTING! Truthfully, I'd believe anything about Jeb's allegiance at this point. Good chapter! :)

-Melissa
Serenity.Jones chapter 8 . 12/14/2008
Good filler chapter, though its kinda short.
melissaeverlasting chapter 7 . 12/13/2008
Which might be a problem, LOL. Great chapter!

-Melissa )
Serenity.Jones chapter 7 . 12/13/2008
heh... I loved that last part, " Oh, I can destroy the world if I want to." best line yet!
Taeniaea chapter 6 . 12/10/2008
great story
the7thflockmember chapter 6 . 12/9/2008
:) this is good! more! :)
the7thflockmember chapter 5 . 12/7/2008
NO! FANG!
Serenity.Jones chapter 5 . 12/7/2008
stupid people who think kids cannot fly... grr... and poor fang! yet,I also feel sorry for Max, whenever that button turns on she wants to kill the flock. WHich I think is kinda sad.
melissaeverlasting chapter 5 . 12/7/2008
It better not be!

Anyway, good story. It's interesting and you've got Max's voice pretty well.

-Melissa
Serenity.Jones chapter 4 . 12/6/2008
poor Iggy. hey is this like a remake of the AE? Cause if it is, then it makes perfect sense!
the7thflockmember chapter 4 . 12/6/2008
ahh, yes, so they did forget about her. poor gazzy, and nudge... and ANGEL! EVERYBODY'S FAVORITE BABY! NO! so... that was good, but definitely very, very tragic and sad.
Serenity.Jones chapter 3 . 12/6/2008
So I read your other story (this one) and you know what? You have an amazing idea with this story. The plot, what is that? Also: Chapters are a smidget short and by adding details you fill in that extra length that is needed. So good job and all that fun stuff. I can't wait to read more.
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