Good story. My favorite part is probably the Yusuke vs. Kuwabara verbal/physical fighting, but the whole thing is good.

Action, humor, drama, and plot. Very well done. Love it.

Nice. Very nice. Like an episode or a chapter or something.

Very nice story! Well done, well written and very entertaining!

this was good

It's a real pity that Sonnet stopped writing "Running with the crow", I really wanted to read more. Can you convince her to get back to it someday? I'm sure some of us will be delighted to read more.

Happy New Year to both of you Nightwalker and Sonnet.

Nice!

-d101

good story,clever

This is great. I like that you've given them a background to work off of, and making Kurama and Kuwabara PI's is clever. The entire story is written with just enough underlying humor to keep it from bogging down in the drama. Yuusuke's continued relationship with Kuwabara made me cackle.

I have so much love for your Yu Yu Hakusho stuff it isn't even funny. I was busting a gut laughing at some of these lines, and you don't even make Kuwabara a moron, which is further kudos to you. Thanks for making my night!

(Cheers) Nice! (Laughs)