Reviews for The Sum of its Parts
Della chapter 10 . 9/2/2018
A long time since you wrote this...but it is well written visceral and really. I thought I was done with your universe...but this...this has me hooked.
hunenka chapter 10 . 10/31/2014
Another great installment in the 'verse. And all three Winchesters are breaking my heart.
Bloodmoon-Shinigami chapter 10 . 6/2/2012
Good you had so many moments of awesome in this one. Bravo, babe. I laughed, I grimaced and held my breath, grinned and almost cried so many times. John showing up and completing the Winchester trio was a definite plus, too. I'm overjoyed that you write him so well, cause I can't stand him being defined as nothing more than an obsessed asshole which happens so often in this fandom.

If I was given the opportunity to stay with Dean, I would NEVER leave him! Poor guy has abandonment issues. (

Seriously, I am really glad I stumbled upon you're page and have had the great opportunity to read your stuff. I hope you try your hand at an original story someday. You've sure got the talent.
Bartlebead chapter 10 . 11/29/2010
Thanks!
Bartlebead chapter 7 . 11/29/2010
Great!
Bartlebead chapter 3 . 11/29/2010
Wondering why Lexapro rather than some of the other antidepressants. Seems kind of heavy for the first go. Then again, he certainly seems to need something rather strong...
Bartlebead chapter 2 . 11/29/2010
Great. Sounds like you know your medicine pretty well. On to the next chapter!
Rosetta Brunestud chapter 10 . 6/16/2010
I loved the story

You showed John pretty well too

Well, hope to see ya around again ~

Kisses

Rosetta
Cushion chapter 10 . 4/23/2010
You are amazing. I LOVE the 'Drive' series and this is most probably my favorite of the entire series so far.

Poor Dean and Sam. I want to hug them so badly. The angst and drama is absolutely enthralling. It's awesome that you managed to get all the characters down right. The talk between Dean and John on Missouri's porch was heartbreaking but not too mawkish - just the way I like it, and the way I imagined it between the Winchesters.

Oh, oh! Another part that I really liked was the encounter with the ghost of Mary. Although short, but a lot more satisfying and touching than the actual scene in the show. I was rather peeved when I watched the episode Home because the boys' encounter with Mary was so anti-climax!

Ok, now I'm babbling away. Anyway, you are a brilliant writer and I really enjoyed reading this! Great job on the 'verse!
PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 10 . 1/31/2010
This was...*deep breath* - wow...this was beautiful - and saved and so many damned things at once, my brain is spinning with them all! Thank you for sharing this..I...thank you.

*hugs*

Mandy
Haylia Jones chapter 10 . 1/25/2010
great fic!
Disneymagic chapter 10 . 11/7/2009
RC,

You just keep blowing me away with your amazing insight into the characters and their personalities. You shine a bright light on what makes them tick and I just love it.

There were a couple of things that bothered me about this episode when it first aired and you fixed them both. First of all, it may seem strange, but I was upset that Jenny allowed Dean and Sam to clean up her house after they were almost killed trying to get the poltergiest out the first time. Thank you for having her turn down their offer to have the house cleaned.

Second, I always thought it was completely heartless for John to hide out at Missouri's house while it was al going down. Thank you for giving him a little more heart.

Your scene between John and Dean where they finally talk about why John left Dean in the hospital was awesome and I'm glad that Dean was able to tell John how shitty that was.

Great job on this story and I am looking forward to reading more.
TheKritty chapter 10 . 9/20/2009
I've already read this a long time ago and just noticed I never reviewed it (dang it!)...

I really have to say that I LOVE this 'verse and I also love this story,with John and captured the boys SO well,even in this horrible situation,Dean's leg/hip, Sam's drinking and all.

Love this 'verse and love your writing stylE!

Kritty
ion bond chapter 9 . 7/13/2009
"refuse to take his calls like they’ve both done before"

Wow, that's true, and pretty illuminating of Dean's character. I'm so sad for him in this story. I hope things get better.
Merisha chapter 10 . 1/30/2009
Well, I'm speechless (kinda, cause I'm still gonna say something ROFL) :D - that was absolutely brilliant! I love the way you portray John, he's an ass, but you still feel for him LOL :D - so glad that Sammy is staying with Dean, and I love the stress and worry that has become a part of Dean's life, never sure what's going to happen, but as long as he has his family, he can hold on.

I loved every single minute of this story, and I'm nervous now, because I only have 2 more stories of yours to read before I'm all caught up ... you better be writing like a crazy person ROFL :D - I'll go into withdrawal if I don't have something to read from you and I don't have Dean's awesome drugs ROFL :D

Hugs and luv

Mish :)
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