lovely story! you captured each character well.

Wow, oh wow! What a gorgeous re-telling of this moving and steamy scene. I'm such a sucker for hot romance, especially when the erotic is intermingled with raw emotion. This was beautifully written and perfectly captured the tender moment between these two wonderful characters. Thanks for the read! I'm all for Bill and Sookie!

All the best,

Demeter :)

Great.

This is exceptionally well done. You have captured the moment perfectly. -Wendie

Good

I really liked it! Good job on a one-shot, i don't normally read them but your one caugt my eye :)

Well Trueblood is still fairly new over here but i gotta say i am loving it so far just as i'm lovin this story. A very nice continuation to what we saw. I'me very strict when it comes to spoilers so its nice to finally being able to read some of these stories because i gotta tell ya it was hard not to. Great job.

Wow, wish I remembered that much detail from my first...and I married the guy, still don't remember that much!

sweet!

if you want to know what they were both realy thinkin' the first tiem they made love, go read the book dead until dark by Charmaine Harris. it's what the show is based on. have fun

This was very well written. Thank you for writting this! I have always loved that first time scene the most out of everything that went on in the season! Again thank you!

Wonderful job! I wish there were more stories about Bill and Sookie. I didn't see very many.

Absolutely perfect!

I'd love for you to continue this one-parter.

Jessica

Wonderful! There are so few Bill stories out there, this one was excellent. Bill's shame at his hunger was heart breaking, and Sookie's calm acceptance was beautifully written. I know it's taken from the TV show, but maybe you could post it over at the SVM fanfic area, too. I'm sure many of the readers over there would love it!

So beautifully written, congratulations!