| Reviews for Confusing Contrails for Smoke Signals |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 Fuck Bella! What kind of deseased soul must she posses to be so afraid of living life on its own terms. To be that big a coward |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2015 Tuff shit Bella. You mean hard like letting you know that you will destroy your own fathers life for this sickness inside of you. Because you lack the courage or heart to live life on its own terms? |
 Vo'komeHo'nehe-or-WhiteWolf chapter 1 . 8/6/2011 That was short but great still, hope to see some prOgress, I think I'm gonna like this story:) |
| AccioCommonSense chapter 1 . 9/20/2010 Well,I'm to tired now to write some long comments,so this is all I'm gonna say; AMAZING! :) |
| Afflictionseclipsedbyglory chapter 1 . 6/25/2010 Such a good story, Bella needs to hear the truth and Stephenie doesn't portray the fullness of Bella's decision, thank you for being intelligent enough for doing so. |
| JBC719 chapter 1 . 5/10/2010 You are just so good. It's amazing to me that as short as many of your fics are, they still convey so much more in the few words you use than so many other fics that are three times the length. To be able to recognize and then, eliminate the unnecessary without sacrificing the heart of what you are writing never fails to impress me. Really, just beautiful stuff. I hope RL allows you to keep writing and sharing with others (real subtle, I know...I'm smooth like that). 8 ) |
| ConNopales chapter 1 . 11/17/2009 I had to stop myself from wanting to cry. It's like getting smacked in the face with a heated steel pan, or a 2x4 with a nail poking out the end. You should have written Twilight. |
| tipica adolescente chapter 1 . 11/10/2009 why? why didn't they end up together? they are perfect! |
| xxAugustaxx chapter 1 . 8/21/2009 Short but to the point. I like it :D |
| stilljustceci chapter 1 . 7/16/2009 Ahh, this one was hurtful. I love the imagery of Bella crying in Alice's waterproof mascara - "inhumanly pristine, unchanging" - and then immediately her neverending selfishness: "Why do you have to make this harder than it already is?" Gah. |
| Countrygal17 chapter 1 . 6/24/2009 this is so sad! but really good! I liked it a lot |
| AceCade chapter 1 . 3/26/2009 omg i loved this. You got my vote :D -AceCade |
| Claire Bloom chapter 1 . 3/21/2009 You captured Jacob's bitterness perfectly. Really well written, great job :o) Cx |
| hopeful wager chapter 1 . 3/15/2009 I am captivated by your writing. It cuts across my jugular in a way that actually leaves me wanting the pain. It's almost sado-masochistic, and I want to be tortured more, because I love the feeling of the bitter- it makes me realize how much I love the sweet. |
| dreaming in black and white chapter 1 . 3/15/2009 Wow...you write really, really well. Your portrayal of the characters is brilliant, and I really enjoyed reading this - thank you! x :) |
