Your Dark Charlie is so good! I hope you find your muse and start writing again!

It's amazing. I love it! The intensity of it is incredible. It's very well written, very catchy, and I could totally see that happening. It's refreshing from the often pointless smutt. It's angsty without being pathetic. I love the part when Crews feels something snap inside of him, and how Reese is part of his 'territory'. Despite how it sounds, she really is part of his world now, and in my view one of the only things that keep him grounded. Reese also seems intent on getting over what just happened to her.

I've only recently discovered the series and been on a Life marathon since then (I'm almost done watching it). I immediately fell in love with it. The characters are deep, and I do share your opinion on Damian Lewis :D

If I can't control my imagination I'll probably end up writing a Life fic.

I see that it's been quiet some time that you've written anything, and hopefully you'll write some more!

xx Jube

Ah Dark!Charlie how I love thee. :D Angsty deliciousness. Nicely done.

-Merrie

oh, you should so continue this, i love this idea and i can't wait to see what would charlie crews do, o, you should definitely continue this, hope you do, see ya round, ;-D

I have to admit, I'm horribly intrigued by dark!Charlie too. Every once in a while we catch a glimpse of him in the show, that subtle iciness in the eyes and utter focus (or single-mindedness). I love how you've managed to convey that here, with a situation that is completely believable. Excellent characterization on both Charlie and Dani. Great job!

Aww...soo sad!

I like this dark Crews too. Nice job!

I loved this. It was fantastic.

I loved Crews' thoughts on territory it was great, and his claim of Reese as his. Protect tour territory and it will protect you was fantastic.

And the sense safty Crews gave Reese in his protective rage perfect. And her need to tell Crews everything was good to.

It was good work I hope you write another soon.

Moo

Oh gosh!

I loved it!

I REALLY loved it!

Yeah right on these two great love crews here so manly

maria

This is great. Seriously. Can't wait for more!

I really liked this! Dani as Charlie's territory and damn anyone who thinks they can mess with her. ;)

That was a great story. I loved how Crews was willing to help her, no matter what she had done.

Where do I start? Wow.. and amazing seems inadequaate.. very realistic and something i could see happening. Please contininue on..