Does Charlie know that Arria is Bella’s mother? And how did they explain all the guards around her? I seem to have missed the explanation..

I can not believe I am just reading this story now. I have always liked your story Unbecoming and have been re-reading it through the years but never thought of reading this one. My goodness this story is very good. Can’t wait to finish reading it.

What is this ridiculous immature bullshit? Tanya stripping? The volturri? Tanyas "powers"? This is so damn stupid.

Was that supposed to be bella showing tanya up? She just sounded so immature and jealous. This entire chapter was fucking embarrassing for Bella.

I finally finished this story! It was a doozy! I really liked it a lot. I liked that Bella got to be immortal without actually being a vampire and how it all ended the most. The relationships were so interesting and funny but I liked them.

9/2/17 It is now 10;04 pm...I started reading you 07:10 am. I love this story. It is hysterical, emotionally stirring,sweetly detailed and nuanced. I have been reading ff from the beginning, I have several lists of recommended stories that I am plowing through. I grade each fiction (A, B-, C-, meh) I relist the fictions for multiple re-reads. My no #1 is Momatu " I remain, yours" This story has made my prime list. I laughed out loud all day, I didn't eat lunch. I am ignoring my dog.
There aren't enough hours in the day. I re-read some paragraphs and laugh because they speak to me. I read from Chapter 1. This is a wunderful AU.

Tanya dances for Jesus? Ha! This story is hilarious!

It took me for-freaking-ever, but I loved this story!
You cracked me up, and made me cry. I yelled at my
phone and tablet, and sighed in delight. This was so
unique and complex. I am truly impressed at the
mananimity of your story weaving efficacy!
*huggles*

Aires has been there, all along?! Oh, my!

I thought this was a real story until I got to chapter 2. Bella insulting Tanya like that just made her look so immature that I lost all respect for her. The vampire sex guides? Are just fucking ridiculous. This is turning into a donkey show and its not at all entertaining.

I hope Edward is able to stop eating his toe jam
soon, and maybe will begin to speak coherently
to Bella...from his heart.

They need to get her dog healed. Or get her ton
Seth and Jake, who I imagine she has become
true friends with.

I'm so glad this story is already complete.
If I was reading it as a WIP, I would be
just about out of my mind right now!

When I realized Edward intended on killing her, I was
horrified! Why has no one figured out that Bella is his
MATE yet?! Just like that other vampire who died at
the sight of her human's death. SOMEBODY has to
figure this out and put poor Edward out of his misery!

I had a feeling that his leaving in this story arc would
be a sacrificial requirement for using those powers.