I like the idea, but you don't give enough background information. You clearly don't have a lot of experience as a writer, as it shows constantly. Your descriptions, dialogue, thought process and settings are written in a very amateur way that bothers me while reading. You don't capture the characters well at all. Mike is ridiculous, so are the Cullens. Bella's car... what the hell is that even about? Makes no sense. The Cullens' reactions to Bella saying vampires was completely wrong. In canon, Jasper and Rosalie were ready to kill Bella for possibly seeing Edward move too fast when he saved her from being killed by Tyler's car. Yet here they're all just shocked and confused, taking no action whatsoever and not even speculating that Bella may not be human, which she obviously isn't simply by her appearance and scent. There are just so many plot holes, starting with Bella being assigned to the Cullens as some sort of angel, which we have literally no information about. And her mate... uh what? This story needs serious work. It's not a terrible story, I'm just very selective about what I read. I prefer well-written stories of high quality, and this one just isn't quite there. I will commend you on an interesting idea though, just not the execution. Best of luck.

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serious edits are needed

Amazing story
I loved how their lives were so interwoven
great stuff _

I enjoyed reading the story! Thank you so much for sharing :)

*Definitely * - I just want to help

Predictable but love your story though

I love Edward's song!

Thank for the story it was great

I am crying readng this story, its so sweet.

you said Edward was dating someone...explain...NOW

Edard was dating? o god please tell me it wasn't Tanya! shes such a whore..he cant get an angel dirty! if he was with Tanya then hes tainted!and he can not taint an angel!

Wow...I love your story:) one of the best I read in a long while, so well written, thank you for sharing it with us. xx

Awsome story far duuuuuude keep it happenin

Why did Charlie kill Kaleb?