Aw, this was really cute. It felt like it could have been an actual episode. :)

Aw! I love the ending. You had a great amount of description without going overboard and a well thought out story line. Great job, and I'm glad it's finished! :)

I enjoyed it. What a Halloween. I especially liked the Pinky and Brain comment. I now have it playing inside my brain.

that was cute! and it fit the show very well.

Kerro

Great! you did an awesome job on this!

i liked it. u should write a sequal

Hey, Prtygirl83! I almost gave up on this story, but I didn't want to let you or my other reviewers down. I'm workin' on the

Valentine story, hope to get it up by Halloween. You want me to e-mail you when it's finished? - Jill W.

O my gosh! I stopped checking on you, and LOOK how much you posted! I'm so glad you finished it, even if it's late. This was a really great fic, you should be proud!

Whoa, wait, there's a Valentine's one? lol Well, heck! What are you waiting for?

Hey Jill, just wanted to say I enjoyed your fic and I look forward to seeing more from you.

Cheers,

Mere

lol cute love it

All right, this was great, 'specially the Epilogue.

Neugogg's always a pretty humorous villian, so I enjoyed his appearance, as well as the Banter he had going on with Hunter at the final showdown. It's a wonder Rusty didn't get suspicious what with Dwayne spouting one liners. Speaking of which, I like the Cy Young mention, and I can totally see Dwayne being an all star pitcher. I meshes with his persona so well, the team leader and all.

The bum cracked me up, it was nice to see Garth get some seat time in the air. I was curious as to where the Floating Molotov cocktails came from, Then I was actually concerned that someone might do that, so I'll be keeping and eye to the sky now. Heh. All in all A work, everyone seemed in character and the story is a great read.

Especially the Epilogue, though you could have drawn out that silence before the BG signal a bit. *smirk*

-n

Hi, there! It's, me, your friendly neighborhood Wapa CM! You mentioned having a page on , so I went looking for you. I just thought I'd drop you a note to say "Hi!"

cool story. i'm sorry that it took me so long to read it. i am glad to hear on the forum that you are back to writing on this.

So, when are ya gonna post the rest? Do I have to start coughing or what? ;) J/K. Keep up the good work... when you have some free time, of course.

Gasp! you added more! the more you write for this story, the more I love it. I can't wait for the costumes!