Holy this is a good one wish there was more to it

When are you going to continue Naruto/Resident Evil crossovers? They are reason I'm following you!

Interesting story so far and all, but your spelling leaves much to be desired.

I'm confused. Are these stories down or not? Did you give up on this site or not? Please answer, because I really like your naruto/resident evil stories. Shall those continue?

God this is awful, why am I still reading this piece of shit of al story. Nothing makes any since. Can't tell who's talking most of the time and none of the dialogs makes any since just like mash of shit put together.

-growls- Minato is like an American Hitler! He had his troops kill virtually every single Uchiha! Even the Innocent Women and Children! That is so very much like Hitler it's not funny. It was an Uchiha holocaust, but I can easily guarantee Minato is going to Hell for the crimes he committed. I'm amazed that his family can't see the Horrendous things he did.

the command room is better know as the bridge (if you want to know why pm me)

you should have made choji into a heavy weapon guy (he got the build for it (pun intended))

Oh heck no! You give him those five fine girls, and then end like that/ You should have ended with all six of them going out to kill and stuff.

Grrrrr... still, I know you won't actually kill any of them off. You ain't like that. You don't kill the main character's girls, unless they're going to be reborn.

So, nice story. Very nice. Wish you ahd actually done some lemons, but other then that, nice.

i frgt 2 review bt i LOVE this story and please make mre

Sequal? But yeah, I liked it, te only flaw I found was the spelling was quite bad. Other than that, really good.

Okay first off they wouldn't be issued weapons from the coast guard's armories. They would draw them from their own and transport them themselves.

And for the love of god, don't call it a "military hummer." at least take the fuckin time to properly research what the things real name is. It a HMMWV High Mobility Multi-Wheeled Vehicle. Humvee.

I won't even bother with the spelling and grammatical errors anymore, merely due tot he sheer number of them.

As for the interaction between officers and lower enlisted personnel: Nobody goes around calling people Private Dan, Private Ken. Probably because these are fisrt names and nobody calls anyone by their first names. BUT officers don't go around referring to people by their rank, unless they were pullin rank.

Plot-hole: Your coast-guard choppers are slow as shit, because i can crawl 300m probbaly in about fifteen minutes. If it takes an Officer and hour into a mission to explain what's going down, and another hour for a helicopter to travel 300 meters, then i weep for today's military.

You either need to do one of two things, explain your ranking system, or use the one we already have in place. You need to create the team structure better. I've read this entire story, but i still don't really know everyone's place on the team. So there's 7 members of FOXHOUND. or are they snkavenom? I'm pretty confused.

Officers who go around saying, "Someone is going to die here tonight" should have never been let through OCS. He should be instilling courage in his men despite what he is feeling in his heart. If he is afraid, then he needs to concentrate on helping his men to get over their fears to help relieve his own. If you can get what i'm trying to say.

Anyways, that's it for this chapter. I'm off for lunch. Will continue after.

Okay review time for the first chapter.

I will be reviewing each of your chapters and hopefully i won' get too pissed off and completly flame your story...it's hard not too. But your story has promise to become a decent and entertaining story.

Okay first off I've found 37 spelling and grammatical errors; this is not including your little Authors notes.

You stated that "command wouldn't want soldiers with emotion to cloud their judgment." we'll not bother with the sheer stupidity of that statment and instead focus on the fact that this sentence is in direct violation of your entire story. If indeed, the "Command" didn't want this, then obviously they would send someone else. Except for maybe naruto who, for the reasons you go on to later point out (no spoilers).

Okay i know you aren't and haven't been in the military, but the way you have your characters talking its hard for me to discern who the leader is. Naruto seems to have rank on everyone else, but he seems to be buddy-buddy with them. This is going to bring me to explaining the difference between the NCOs and Officers command chains. They're two seperate chains, and you don't get promoted from Sergeant Major to 2nd LT like you do in MW2. E-10 is the higest you go . Granted you can go Green to Gold, but generally if you've been in the army long enough to reach E-8(first sergeant) then your a lifer and aren't going to be an officer.

With that being said, not a bad start to a story with an entertaining plot.

well, i got bored while waiting for another chapter of LoC to come out so i read this. in 1 day... missing 3 hrs of sleep haha. i loved the story, but the last part was abit weird, is naruto in a zombie infected town? and who is the other guy? are you gonna make a sequel, cause it will be so damn awesome if you did...

Hmm so the moral is that socialism is the way to happieness it was pretty good though but haku is a guy and you could have gone into kibas feelings on his dad getting killed and naruto being his possible half brother although being a RE fan it was decent