The whole thing about Padme losing the will to live never made sense. It's the only scene in ROTS (which is my favorite SW Prequel movie) that I have a problem with. A Droid saying a person has lost the will to live makes no sense.

She was hurt, yes. Was her heart broken? I'm sure it was. My problem is a Droid saying she has lost the will to live. A Droid is a machine they get their information from other machines. So what was that like:

Oh no, we're losing her!
Check her vitals!
Pulse, check, Heartbeat, check, Blood Pressure, check
Did you check the will to live monitor?

Question, How does Palpatine know that Padme is dead? There on Coruscant, she's on Polis Massa.
Maybe there was more involved in Padme's passing than her allegedly losing the will to live. Something that a machine couldn't detect like the dark side.

This is what should have happened, Kenobi should have been completely honest with Luke. A lot of bad things could have probably been avoided.

Totally amazing story. Thank you for writing it.

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I love the way you use your words in your fics. I've noticed you used lots of emotional sentences that most fanfiction authors don't use. That's what makes your stories unique. I admire the way you write.

Your father son vader and luke story are amazing. I love the bond they share. I really like you compare Luke and Padme lots people say they are similar which is some what true however Padme doesn't have that inner strength that Luke has. I also like how you talk about Padme "losing the will to live" and how you were blunt at saying she basically gave up. Most Star Wars fanfiction writers will either twist it or refuse to address it. I always wanted to know what luke or leia thought of their mother losing the will to live. Good story :)

This was beautiful! Yes, yes, yes. Fantastic. Really, really good.

Great one shot, to bad there was not more to it.

This was so... POWERFUL! The faith that Luke had was just so moving that it brought tears to my eyes.
I wish this was how Luke found out about his father... Anakin might not have died and would've returned to the Light side sooner.

Nice!

Powerful and deeply moving. I love it.

I wish this was the first part of the rest of the original movies.
Ani might of return to the light side of the force sooner

Daaaaannng, I wish this had actually happened. Nice job!

In light of TFA, this is very, very powerful. I checked the date to make sure that you hadn't written it post-TFA to mirror *spoilers.* Are you certain Disney didn't read your fic?

Gives me chills to see this in light of what happened in 'The Force Awakens' and a very, very good reason the damn movies should have been made in order!