I'm sorry, I can't even finish reading this because everyone is just so out of character. Gah!

I personally loved it!'!

This is amazing. I fell in love the instant I saw it. Thank you for putting the time and effort into writing this amazing story.

Crazy Female LEPrecon

this fic was bloody awesome (pun not intented, but nice ) thanks for writing this! i always though jasper was underestimated by the others! this fic has practically everything i wanted to read about him! (and let's not forget alice! she was amazing as well of course)

Brilliant story - loved the direction of the plot, and the "different" nature of the story line. Its so very nice to have something unique to read :)

Hugs

Hissy

Very enjoyable story...great touch with the game of Risk.

Just an aside from an English buff, good spelling and grammar are important in any field of endeavor.

Best, Ann in SC

This is certainly different from any other Cullen story I've read. Very entertaining!

I loved reading this story- Im so sad that i've finished it :'(

I loved this story. I am firmly on Team Jasper and I haven't read that many fics that look at the way he thinks, but this captured him and the way that he would behave if his family was in danger. I think that you managed to capture all of the aspects of how he would look at a situation.

Hi there,

Just wanted to let you know I really liked your story and am sorry it is over. I'm not good at being specific, but if I had to name something it would be the action-packed aspect of your story and the creativity you showed in making up new powers. Always like to read about new powers!

Thank you

Oh my gosh I loved this! And I can't believe I've never reviewed before! I had this strong dessire to read this story again and searched for like ten minutes but I found it! This is great!

Eminnis

Oh my goodness, I LOVED this story xD

I think you wrote each character pefectly in your own way and it made the entire story come alive!

Fantastic job!

Amor,

IYD24

Love the image of Jasper walking outside in just a pair of 'wind' pants. Seriously though, good story .. . . . well done.

really enjoying this story, can't wait to finish it after work!

I really enjoyed this story. You did a good job of showing the solider side of Jasper. Good Job!

P.S. I like you name.