Wow!

please complete this story, I love it!

When will we see some action between hay hay and eric?

This definitely the best chapter so far

She is so going to get pregnant.

Wow.

At least he's sensitive.

Wow...

Fairly good, keep writing

*pant ... sigh ... gasp*

Hey, where're the sequels? We were promised sequels ... ;D

Whenever you can manage to type again, girl. But like Eric's probably saying to Hay-hay (or Hay to Eric!), "Don't leave me hanging ..." Catch ya on the flipside, A J.

great story i loved it :)

Wow! That was a really great story! LOL. Very nicely detailed XD

Wow this was a hot story. Will was super hot encouraging Matt to continue. Perhaps next time she can be more encouraging with a little head.

Please continue it, or make a sequel.

As for Cornelia, pair her up with Peter and make him huge so that Cornelia freaks out... in a good way.

And don't forget Taranee/Nigel and Hay-lin/Eric. Please make at least one of these girl a FREAK! Either make one a really kinky nympho or an S&M queen.

Oh, and if you can find the inspiration to keep writing, how about a chapter/story involving Susan(Will's mom)/Mr Collins and Elyon with someone. Maybe put Elyon in a three-way with her best friend Cornelia. Peter's man enough from both of them right?

This turned out to be a great fic. Please write more of these.

more chapters please with more hot sex

well, i'll be holy; that was darn good if i may say so. actually led to some RL action for me. keep this up, lady. (the five people reading over his shoulder: "GO GIRL!")