omg, I've read three deeply depressing storys in a row...one more and I think I might commit suicide! WAH! STUPID BAKA SASUKE! and in all three sasuke's a f*ck*ng sh!t head w*nk*r!

is that all you are going to wright you should make it longer like sasuke was gust dreaming of when he kild him self and naruto really didient die he wus anconshis when sasuke bers him and dug him self out of the hole and went to diffrent towns and re named him self but he never went beck to konnaha and then way hes going to the next town he finds sasuke woof