I kind of felt bad for Mario. I mean, he's player one, but that means added pressure. At least Luigi can slink back into his shadow, Mario genuinely can't.

Oh, cool. Glad you make it seem that Mario doesn't have it entirely his own way after all.

Mario should definitely listen to Luigi about the cake. It's a lie!

awesome!

*faved,along with basely all your other fics.*

Very nice. I give this fanfic a well deserved thumbs up, and hope to see your continuuing writings in the future.

Also, that palace of shadow scene was awesome.

"You guys better not let me die in there, I swear"

"No promises"

Priceless.

Heh, yeah I don't think I'm a 'Player One'. Way too much pressure for one thing. Anyways, now I've read both of your Player One-shots, and they're really good! Great job of writing from a different perspective.

"she has cake dude!" loved that phrase! jeje

Very good! I liked it!