Reviews for Surprise!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
That ending was unexpected... I think you should have kept the depressingly lonely ending. The angst was better. lol. Otherwise I liked it. You have an interesting way of expressing yourself. Well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
PLS CONTINUE!
Stillnight chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Sounds very promising Hopefully you will continue this one day
DojomistressAmbyChan chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
misunderstandings are always fun. Hope you continue.
maethebellydancer chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Loved it. Thank god it wasn't a nobody loves Iruka story.
Stitched In Ice chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Please continue, please continue~! 3 I'll give you a cookie! Pwetty pwease?
Jade-Silverwolf chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
You should so do a new chapter!
Snorlax-Beanie-Hat chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
ROFL!

You must continue with this! You must must must must must! In fact, i think you should upload a chapter right now!
applee03 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
jijiji, funny!

To be continued?

*please*
shooting-star12341234 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
Please, please, PLEASE! Do more! It's so good!
MusicLOVEPainter chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I knew it was a surpise party! xD! You HAVE to write the next one! I'll be waiting!
silverspeech chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
I really liked this idea and I think if you've already thought of where you want to take this story it wouldn't hurt to continue, plus I'd really like to see how everyone reacts...:)
Kitkat973 chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
I hope you do decide to continue this. :)
incandescentglow chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
LOL I love this! You should most definitely continue. I'd love to see what you have planned for the next chapter.
Friglit chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
Heh. This works really well as a standalone piece, but I would love to see you continue it!
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