very nice and sweet.

get back!get back!get back!ehehehe B/A )

Loved this one. Short but sweet. Aw...

Aw! What more can you say to this? It's so adorable! I really, really like this!

And neither of them drooled LOL - perfect, what a nice little peek into their respective dreams

This is absolutely LOVELY, and just what I needed to be reading on a cold, dark January evening. It warmed me up nicely.

Aww. This was very sweet. I adore it. God, they love each other so much and are trying way too hard to hide it. Fabulous work. :)

aww! This is so sweet!

hi! so, of course, when i saw the word "sequel" on your next one, i had to come find this one first. i am VERY glad i did. you paint a beautiful picture of this unexpected, natural moment of intimacy between these two people who usually keep their feelings for each other hidden ... or perhaps they are just discovering them. anyway, it's on to the sequel, and i hope you will keep writing more. this was really nice!

This is a really great piece. I can definitely see this happening! I hope you continue putting them in 'comfortably dangerous' proximity.

Beautiful. Please write more soon.

They both drift off into sound asleep again, looking for all the world like a couple who are completely comfortable in each other's orbits.

Well, of course they are! They love each other! :) I'll say it again: Very sweet, very intimate peek into their odd, weird, wonderful little world.

I'm so glad you posted. Keep writing!

Mhm...I like it.

So wonderful the two POV of each one. They both like it and wants to do it again...but how? Maybe you continue it and show me how?

This was very sweet. I liked the use of scent and touch in this piece. - Dix.

Aww, very cute! Loved this peak of Goren and Eames in transit. :-)