This was bittersweet... so realistic, and I liked how you portrayed her emotions.

Perhaps not one of your better pieces. It doesn't really carry as much emotion as the others.

"The light side" registered as rather corny to me, but other than that, it was a good fan fic from Ginny's perspective. I like how you ended it on a positive note too.

"...they'd shared a deep emotional bond the year before..."

You're a good writer, but if you don't learn to read between the lines and push your readers to make inferences, then it will be SO cheesy and annoying.

I agree, their story was not at all written the way I would have liked it to be. But I, like you, realize that JK wrote this for the kids (not necessarily their moms who would have enjoyed reading about the deep meaningful conversations.) Oh well, you have partially made up for it here. Good job.

THANKS U SO MUCH I ACTUALY SAID OK IM GONA GO FIND A FANFIC ABOUT GINNYS PERSEPCTIVE IN THE BATTLE thank you!

Oh. My. Gosh. That was absolutely perfect! I loved it!

Hi. Your story was a great way to show Harry's "death" from Ginny's perspective.

It was an awesome story.

Congrats!

i really liked that, it was well written and you could really feel just how she felt in that position.

well done )

I really like your story! It is awesome! I totally agree about Harry and Ginny's relationship being deeper than just snogging. I write their relationship deeper than that because I believe that Ginny is the only one who can really understand what it's like to have Voldemort in your head. She helps Harry through the tough times because she understands. Anyway, GREAT STORY!

Lol, I don't have to pretend that they have a deep bond, I know they do :P

But anyways, I loved it. You really got the power of that moment for Ginny and the anguish she would have felt. Great writing :)

That was good! Oh the feeling of dipair you drew from her! The feelings of hope!

Excellent.