Reviews for Pick Up Lines
victoriaseve chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
haha, this is hilarious!

i loved it (:
ride2night chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Am I getting annoying yet? Haha sorry but once in awhile I go through the stories of author's whose stories I like...if that makes sense? Anyway-I love how Shane uses all those stupid pick up lines...which totally work on me_ haha.

~L~
crankyXwhenXprovoked chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
Like everytime i type shaitlyn into the search bar and this comes up i have to read it. it is SO great and funny
canndyyy chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
liked it

ALOT

really cute

awesome job

canndy

:)
LittleRedOne chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
Haha. This made me crack up! I love it. You're a great writer.

Kelly
327 chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
that was cute Kana! and i love Shaitlyn now, great job!

-lily-
D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
OMG.

That was so so so frigge e!

I'm so in love with this Bunni!

GAH. So cute!

They're both so in character, like Shane is all Shane with his pick up lines and Caitlyn is all sarcastic and Caitlyn-esque!

GAH. I love lov this!

job my darling!
The First Ghost Boy chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
That was so friggin corny, and yet I savored every second of it. Nice job Kana-chan.
jarcielle36 chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
aw its really cute!

Im actually Naitlyn but i love shaitlyn too hahahaha
DramaticStarlet chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Again, Kana. I'm going to flipping marry Shane and his adorableness.

I just adored it! It was such a sweet take on Shane and Caitlyn. :)

I would right more, but...lol, I have no idea what to say...

xoKatie.
PrincessSerenity2630 chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
-waves- HIHI! IT'S ME WITH THE WEIRD REVIEWS! -giggles-

-nibbles cupcake- I have a bunch of cupcakes, and it's getting me hyper, desu! (SUU. MUST. DIE!) Anyways, I love the ending...Do you know how to edit pics, by the way? I was just wondering...HEE HEE! -coughs- Stupid sugary icing...SO KAWAII! I love it. XD

MAKE. MORE. SHAITLYNS! (
rachel chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
I liked it.

It seemed like everyone was in character and the pick-up lines were great.

Very adorable.

I liked the ending. That was a nice touch
hollabackgirl1 chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
i love it.
Con-Nike chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
OMJ! This is absolutely hilarious! I LOVE it!
Pyro Is Too Lazy To Log In chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Kana! I love this! I love Shaitlyn, I love Shane, I love Caitlyn and I love you for writing this! The ending was adorable, I have absolutely nothing but adoration for you!

Thank you for writing this AND for dedicating 1/3 of it to me! You're the best!

-Ada
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