LOLOLOLOLOLOL!

Poor Donnie, getting teased the whole time by Raph and Mikey _ Oh shell, two weeks! You guys are SOOOOOO gonna kill each other lol

Geez Splinter, how could you NOT hear them if you were in the dojo?

That or he was using ninja hearing to spy on them XD lol

LOVE LOVE LOVED IT!

That was awesome! Don and his horniness ;D

Me: I have a fun game.*grins evilly*

Don: Ack!

Me: *glomps unexpecting Don*

Mikey: Is that what feeds his horniness?

Me: Nope. That's what makes him all warm and fuzzy inside and makes me happy as a clam. :D

Leo: Okay...?

Raph: I'm gonna go ask Splinter if she can stay. Donnie seems to be enjoying it.

Don: No, NO! I'll do anything, just get rid of her!

Me: Y-you don't...like me? *eyes tear up and lip trembles*

Don: No! I mean...uh...I...not really?

Mikey: Nice going, dude! Make her cry, why don'tcha?

Me:...YOU JERK!*smacks Don hard and stalks off*

Don: O.O

Raph: Whoa.

Leo: That was Raph like.

Mikey: She's scary!

Me: Do you want a piece of me too? D:

Mikey: No! I...oopsSplinter'scallingbye!*Flees*

Me: Now Don, you want to tell me again how you feel about me?

Don: You're...nice. And...erm...pretty?

Me: Good answer.

Wow, that was a long review of almost nothing about the story...wierd.

So...I'll tell you how much I loved this chapter! It was really well written, the ideas were absolutely hilarious, and I thought the whole concept that they're all grounded was great. I've personally never been grounded, though I'm sure I was close to it a few times. However, I wouldn't mind being grounded with Don!

Don: I thought you were upset with me!

Me: It's too hard to stay mad at someone so sexy *glomps*

Don: ...ouch.

Keep writing!

The Light Of Reason

lol. you gonna do a day-by-day blow of how they deal with it. if they're all this good i defiantly will read them. lol

Ash, I love the changes you made. It was my first time reading those changes, so it made it all the more special haha. I have to say you did a great job with comedy, I knew you could do it! *forks 10 bucks over to Georgia.. jk lol*

My favorite line is still "Whos your daddy?" xD I can so see Raph saying that.

And Tauni, lol. You never cease to amaze me. I wonder if this would be what a game of pictionary would be like between us. What do you think? I'd probably get bored and just start drawing a bunch of pensies...

rofl "Elephant?"

"Why's she only got one boob, dude?" I love this. And then Donnie gets all analytical about it xD.

Great job :P

lol this was hilarious! I loved that whole 'all it gave Raph was heartburn' thing. Best part ever.