I like it so far. Update!

not bad.

It would actually make a scary amount of sense with Wolf with how he acts. He's not 'evil' persay, just following orders most of the time; and the other is just trying to prove himself to the galaxy, so nothing too evil there.

Wolf actually defending Pit? Again, goes back to the 'scary amount of sense' thing.

can't wait for the next chapter.

Later,

RDF1

Not bad, I really Liked this chapter, I wonder if Hades will send Pit on the mission or not...

This is a pretty good story!

The only thing I think you could improve on is character interaction. It seems as if the characters (Hades) are easily persuaded. One moment he says they'll be his slaves for eternity, and after Wolf asks him a favour, his demeanor suddenly changes.

Other than that, keep it up!

good good very good! i wonder if hades really would let him go? oh and i wonder how Samus will react when she finds out what pit did for her! please update soon!

this story is so good! i love Pit x Samus!please please please update soon! i really want to know whats going to happen!this story is awesome!