Kill me! Kill me now! Because I can't let go either!

That is one haunting fic. Beautiful and haunting. It wasn't creepy to me. How could this creep me out when I'm too hurt to be scared?

this was-to simply put it-amazing and thought out very well. The descriptions were wonderful and the story was great. I loved this to pieces! :D

Oh my gosh! i got goosebumps in the end!

it's midnight to add i love the way you write it and wow the last lines are crEEpy...

better show it to my friends they're gonna strangle to me death lol haha

... screaming... okay.. the last line is scaring me...

best gin/ran fic i've read! it's smart and well written.

a very clever story.

aw. that was such a sweet story.

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um.. i'm too lazy for constructive criticism right now... what i can come up with though is that the ending of that story was what an ending for one of my favorite horror story author's short story would be. and her endings to her horror short stories are great. it brings shock, but also great satisfaction. so yeah, your ending is a delightful mix of shock and satisfaction. that's a good thing. _

Wow...that was amazing! The 'singing' and things really start to make this fic come alive. What I like best is "I just don’t think there can be ghosts in Seireitei.” It shows that you remembered the little details that make so many fics seem more real.

Hey this story is really interesting, but I'm kinda confused at the ending. Are you going to make it longer? I hope you do and I like how different it is. It's refreshing well anyway keep up the good work and I hope you write many many more of these! They are such a good couple no matter how twisted.

OMG this is just...just wow. I love this. Especially when the singing stops and the screaming begins. I am a massive GinRin shipper and its hard to find good fics for them. This is awesome! Great job.

Delightfully creepy! It leaves a bit to wonder about, with the singing, that it’s not him but her. A little confusing as to how exactly, but it adds to the effect. A very good Halloween piece! Thanks for sharing.

~HH

Ooh. Nicely written, I must say. You have some spelling (and maybe grammer) mistakes here and there, but it's a good plot, especially for Halloween.

Good job.

Creepy, but cool. I really like it; perfect atmosphere for a Halloween fic. Keep writing,

taoT