Wish you would have made Albus face what he had done. But fantastic overall!

Hello there.
I find the tale quite intriguing, but do have a small complaint.
In this chapter alone I read "watch your back" and "have your back" so many times, it gets a bit irritating.
Perhaps it might be a good idea to rephrase a few of those sentences?
Otherwise, great story.
cheers,
Heksy

Talking about the headmaster in this chapter reminded me about Harry's abuse. His husbands were so upset and punished his relatives, but didn't do anything to Dumbledore. Harry told them he knew but made him go back because of the blood wards. Is he going to get his?

That explains it a little better. Do they realize how incredibly brave Harry was on their wedding night? After what he went through, anything could have happened. He could have passed out. He could have cried. His magic could have exploded. His magic could have killed both of them. Harry's strength is always being underestimated.

At least they aren't going to have at him all weekend. Glad to see that comment about pregnancy. Takes some worry away from me.

Ok, so, Harry is the one that gets pregnant? Does he even know he can? Are they ever going to tell him? Are they going to try to get him pregnant before the year is over to keep him? Right now the only ending I want to see is Harry telling them to f off at the end of they year. Oh, by the way, you don't show someone you love them by being gentle while raping them on their wedding night.

They used a spell to stick him to the bed? Way to engender trust. And 'they' decided he could play? Is he their child or their future husband. Why is he not more upset about them controlling his life? He always was before when someone tried. They can read his emotions? Are they just going to tell him crumbs of what this new life will be like as they come up? They way this is going, he's going to be a bonded slave.

What's with 'little one'? Sounds like they're talking to a 3 year old.

Interesting plot and premise. Can't help but think that everyone, including all the adults, would be angry this happened. He's 15. Below the age of consent. I know that oath is binding, but it was made under impossible circumstances. Can't help but think of Lucius and Snape (especially Snape) as pedophiles. Why can't they wait until he's an adult? Why is everything about their relationship and bonding tied to sex? Won't there be anything else in it for Harry? Is he just going to have to bend over every time they tell him? Seems he will be a sex slave rather than a bonded member of the triad.

I guess I don't understand why they couldn't ask under veritaserum if they had accomplices or if others help plan the attack. Seems logical...of course this IS the Wizarding world.

I don't know if you'll read this or not, but I really like your writing! I've read a few of your other stories and just want to say that I hope you'll keep writing when you have the time. Thank you so much for sharing your talent!

loved the story thank you

thanks again for your time and talent

love the chapter

thanks for the story