I thoroughly enjoyed this-very heartfelt, funny and well-characterized. I want to express my appreciation, also, for seeing it through and completing it, even if real life got in the way for a while. I don't know if your writing will lead back to Jak fiction again, but please be assured your works will always be welcome here.

Jesus Christ.

First of all, this is an incredible story and honestly left me wanting to read the next chapter. This story was well written with comprehensible writing that definitely reflected an experienced writer. The part you wrote about the zoomer mechanics and whatnot all sounded justifiable and well researched. Not only that, but the characters were amazingly empathized with.

Though initially, I wasn't too sure what was exactly wrong with Keira's mood swings (I thought too deep into it, thinking that something beyond big was going to be revealed), but after the hints to revelation, it's a totally understandable situation especially for a girl's POV or anyone who has been in love. Writing this story that identifies common relationship conflicts is what makes it more believable, more identifiable, and more valuable. Your portrayal of Jak definitely awakens my childhood crush for him haha, but I will forever ship this couple.

I hope to see more work from such a talented artist as yourself in the future since you have definitely gained plenty of fans!

Great!

Great!

The funny thing is I beat Jak 3 today. NO JOKE.I started hero mode ( you have to buy it with the secret eggs )but don't really understand the point of it. The ending ( of the game ) sucked. i like how you spoil the end about Tess becoming an Otssel now Daxter really can get naughty ;). anyway it was/is (i know you don't want to, but please do more.) a great fic.

if you think this is a ton of fluff, you have never spent more than 5 minutes looking for a good fic and i think you are the only person in the M section that has no lemons (you keep it to a minimum.) and has no suicidal characters. (those sort of creep me out.) 5 stars good work PLEASE! I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT THIS FIC

I'm about 5 years minimum too late, haha, but I just want to say this was brilliant, I'll definitely keep a look out for any Kristin Neal books. I read all the chapters in one go, well I read the first chapter then had a day and a bits break, but that's because I stupidly didn't see the next chapter button. Haha, it was late, I'll blame that. I wouldn't say it is too mushy, but then I love well written romance. The best bit is it's not just mush for the sake of mush, there's a real, good, story that it's all based around.

This story is amazing because I couldn't not read the next bit, yes I have a small break after the first chapter, but you know why. And I was torturing myself for that short break about where the rest of the story was, there had to be more. It made me actually feel too, I wasn't just reading the words.

I'm looking to be a game designer in the future and am doing some studying for it at the moment, I have an assignment to write a pitch document, which requires an idea, which lead me to thinking about some of my favourite games and those that have shaped who I am. My first thoughts really were of the Jak and Daxter Series, and I thought of replaying the games, but my girlfriend has borrowed my PS2 and games and I no longer on The Precursor Legacy or Daxter (or a PSP to play it on, haha) which all brought me to the internet to find fan art, and it's from the picture Grease Monkeys by CopyCat87, a brilliant piece that I found this piece of FanFic. Thank you so much, you have sated my desire for more Jak and, especially more Keira because the games don't give it enough attention.

This is just amazing and I have rambled too long, so in closing very well done.

I just want you to know Alternative Delirium that you are my favorite author now. You write the BEST OF THE BEST fanfic. I've read all of your storys and their my favorite. Especially After the Storm. Although Shiner is a VERY close second. I'm a sucker for JakXKeira stuff. Wonderfully epic job on all of you fanfic!

This was very fluffy and I liked it! I hope life is going great for you and your dreams are coming true!

WHOO! YEAH! WHOO! HOORAY!

That was so awesome. I loved that fic... will totally read any future novels of yours. I hope happiness for both you and your fiance. Tell him I said 'hi' 'kay? XD

The LOVE ANGST! It BURNS!

Nothing against your writing, again, it was a beautiful chapter. So much lovin' and whatnot. 3

But the situation makes me sad... LOVE ANGST~ BLAAH.

What I think I love most is that you've been able to protray Keira with these confusing emotions without making her out to be whiny, fickle, or... or lack of better terms... a bitch. You've given her real conflictions of the heart and even though she feels frustrated she doesn't take it out on Jak.

I think of all the possible drama that could come after this chapter and it stresses me out. Very nice writing though. Don't mind me. I think I'm feeling the backlash of all the fluff.

Such sweet, sweet fluff... 3

I saw that one comeing. Oh, Tess... I knew that was going to happen. She's just trying to be a good friend.

To tell you the truth, Keira being pregnant had never crossed my mind as a possibility. :P I had expected it to be her sensing and fearing Dark Jak, who is just beneath the surface, waiting, lurking.

Baby, baby, baby, baby. Hehehe... JxK babies. 3 The thought makes me giddy.

Holy crap, I love your writing style. To tell you the truth, I was a little skeptical at the beginning with all the cursing and then the use of words like 'babe' and 'honey', but I really came to like it.

Strangely, I thought Jak and Keira's character fit them quite well. I'm very picky when it comes to J&D fanfiction, but you have been able to capture them and incorporate a passionate love without it seeming out of place.

I love it.

Oh, and good luck with the novels. You'll do great.