i so new that was what was missing i was setting here say they need a baby that will cure it thats wats missing

This was so beautiful. Keep it up.

I wish they had a happy ending. This was really good and showed the deep connection a husband and wife should have even through problems. I am finishing a story involving T.K. and Kari but it is much dark-themed and do not have the happy ending.

That was SO sweet! ::squels::

Sequals are good! Hint, Hint...

God, i just finished my fifth box of kleenex. that was just...wow! this is something i really needed after feeling like crap the whole day.

It was ok in the begginning but I really didn't like the ending! How TK just sit there and let Kari do something like that? Sorry, but I just hated how you made it look like TK was Kari's puppet or something like that.

OMG! This is so cute! I loved it! You are really good! I wish I could add this to my favorites!

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I love this story ! It seems so real!It was very thought out and beautifully writen story..I couldn't think of a better ending for it! It was sooo cute! your a very talented writer and as in the words of Takeru a very good writers mind!or something like thaT!

I'm quite impressed with this story. Especially since you're a Daikari fan, but that's not the issue. You're very talented so keep writing, no matter what story you plan to write :) (even if i do support Takari...)

oh how cute :) Another great story!

Awwwwww...that was so sweet!