| Reviews for Dark Secret |
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   Ryan Mashall chapter 11 . 6/30/2017 Ehh, hvn a girl in their house is gonna mess up the nice vibes they hv going on, cnt she say w/Lamby? |
| Ryan Mashall chapter 7 . 6/30/2017 The grammar is ok bt the story is getting interesting, not sure where it'll go from here bt im intrigued |
| Ryan Mashall chapter 5 . 6/30/2017 How did shanks get Zoro's contact info? |
| Ryan Mashall chapter 3 . 6/29/2017 How did Shanks get inside? Wherd Garp go? Man Ace should take some meds or get help or smthn.. |
| Ryan Mashall chapter 2 . 6/23/2017 does ace know abt luffy's secret? |
| Ryan Mashall chapter 1 . 6/23/2017 few missing word here and there, but i like it! I'm curious to se the direction it'll go |
| izzywolf22 chapter 15 . 2/6/2015 Great story |
| izzywolf22 chapter 10 . 2/6/2015 When they started frickle frackling, I lost it, btw it's like 4-5 am trying not to squeal |
| TheOnePieceVirus chapter 1 . 11/5/2014 Hooked right away! Very Intresting, great that it's Zoro x Luffy ( cause they are my favorite couple!) it's great that Ace-san is there. I like ZOLU and ACELU 'n LAWLU So it's my kind of story Sincerely The One Piece Virus |
| i love u chapter 14 . 7/4/2014 wow i loved the lucci and luff pairing im kinda sadistic so i loved the electric collars. i was searching for a fanfic that i liked and this is the best ive read! im ur BIG No.1 fan! ok?hehe |
| SnowyIce chapter 15 . 11/20/2013 Yo, I have just finished reading your story and I must say, I really enjoyed it :D I want to make a few remarks on your grammar though. You have a tendency to mix "your" and "you're", "its" and "it's", "were" and "we're" etc. In addition, you sometimes have errors in your use of past and present tense. Some of your sentences are also kinda weird. I'm not saying this to make you feel bad. I just want you to keep these things in mind for the next story you will write, since grammar can drag the quality of a story down. It was a really good story though and I enjoyed it :D Keep up the good work ZoLu forever 3 |
| Izzywing chapter 15 . 4/7/2013 Its funny how I got something in my eye right at the end of the story... Luved it! |
| Demonslave chapter 1 . 4/1/2013 I love your work :) please do more! |
| Fan chapter 14 . 1/11/2013 I absouletly love your work! I also hate how much I love some of the secens. x/3 For example this chapter 14. I honestly still hate Lucci but i can't get over him and luffy. I am a die hard zolu fan but your making me doubt myself. XD I also think your little commentarys are funny. PLEASE! DO THE WORLD A FAVOR AND NEVER STOP WRITING FAN FICITONS TTwTT |
| SinAngel9 chapter 15 . 9/27/2012 nice story |
