Damn, that was really good. The whole story with Boyd Sherman was really interesting in the show, albeit rather short.

Im glad that you picked it up and spent your time creating an interesting story of your own out of it.

Thank you for sharing.

Actually you, as the writer, made Derek talk a lot despite his efforts not to talk. Good job hehe

Very well written chapter.

Ah, that was interesting, heading for chapter two now.

Maybe a tad ooc on Sarah’s part, as she wouldn't mention j-day so easily. The doc would've probably notice she doesn't protect her 'daughter' in the drawing.

Cameron, perhaps, will try to act more humanly. She is capable of this, after all and it will raise less suspicion.

All in all, they aren't really there for therapy. It is likely they will play a part, both she and Sarah, and won't really give away who they really are.

You’ve captured Derek and John very well and I like Sherman’s observation of Cameron.

Wow each individual one-shot was so dramatic and tense and in-character. Great story.

I like this very much. May favorite chapter was the Derek chapter. I liked that the doctor did so much with so little (much like Derek's presence in the show). I liked also the description of him as a sort of advance guard for Sarah.

Awesome.

I thought this was very insightful. I liked seeing the doc's point of view for each of our family. It was neat seeing how they would each deal with someone who was genuinly trying to help them but not being able to accept or use it.

Good job.

Well done, and kudos for finishing it.

Sara's part was the best. I could clearly see her!

Wow,k that was intense and really well done. I loved that he got under her defenses but had the best of intentions. It's sad that on the show he'll never get to really try and help Sarah out with her issues and fears.

I think you did an excellent job being perceptive of the deeper characters at work in Sarah and the rest of the Conners. I'd love to see more in this series but if this is all there is then thank you for sharing this story with us.

Merry Christmas!

-Ellie

Awesome chapter update soon.

I think your was a far smarter use of Dr. Sherman than the series. they completely unused him and even seemed pointless; I mean he died and apparently the Connors didn't even know or cared. however through your story one can better appreciate what each character is going through, who and what they really are, and how someone trying to help them out (arguably) ends up getting way over his head. Maybe you could add an addendum to your story where Dr. Sherman actually gets Sarah's old Pescadero file and gets "surprised" by what he finds out.

I really liked this but I thought she was gonna open up more! I guess I should have known, I mean she IS a terminator! But hopefully you'll give us another session where she does :) SOmething he says catches her guard down ? :)

Sorry, I don't have a well rounded critique for you; however, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I'd like to see it continue for sure. It reminds me of when I was a child. Wow, that sounds bad huh? It makes me grin at how accurate your portrayal sounds (from the character's frame of reference).

Write more! ;)