That was awesome! Tatsuya had it coming, he should of just left Ryou alone when he was trying to show him mercy from his other half. But seeing how he was willing to let Ryou die it was a good thing Yami Bakura came in took care of him or else he would of done it again.

He should be thankful to him for saving his life, even though he turned Tatsuya into a doll.

I'm faving this and I love this story.

Awesome story!

I'm seriously addicted to your stories. I'm pretty sure I'm going to make a point of reading every single one.

Amazing.

Poor Ryou, he tried to warn him, but I think he deserved it.

Very well-written, I'm definitely favoriting.

ViLaVi

I enjoyed this story, much better and more realistic relationship between Ryou and Thief King. Keep it up, and thanks for the evil goodness!

woah that was awesome!

Bakura can kick some ass! LOL Poor Ryou...he should have listened to bakura in the first place.

AWESOME!

love ur stories!

thanks!

(i should be doing my hw, but this is far more interesting!)

Beautiful, just plain beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

What a chilling ending.

Wow... That was creepy. Thought provoking too; I feel so sorry for Ryou! I usually like fics where Bakura and Ryou are friends, but ones that show Bakura's manic side are great too! Well done!

It is Great!

Woohoo! I really love your one-shots. You're getting better and better writing them. This doesn't mean I would dislike your other fics, of course.

In my opinion the ending was the most "mysterious" and kind of open for a reader's imagination to think what would've happened next. It was well thought. My favourite part from this fic, actually. And Ryou's "schedule" for weekend (giving him hobbies etc.) didn't seem as made up as it is in some fics. It was simply normal how to spend a weekend for a someone like Ryou. Last, it was nice to have Bakura IC (you always have him IC, though...) and not act because he'd care for Ryou but in order to save his plans from becoming undone before even start. And before I forget: You don't know how happy I was to see a fic where Ryou had difficulties with excepting Bakura and his "help" and even admitted it without trying to be Bakura's friend. I could say this was canon in a way; it could've happened in a normal schoolday. Excellent! Write more of these!

River

Wow, this is wonderful. Another amazing work from BGA's printing press! Very well written. It explores a certain aspect of Ryou. He doesn't want to fight Tatsuya, yet won't subject his to Bakura's wrath. Protecting his attacker from a worse threat, in a way. Anywho, I really like this. Nicely chosen title, as well.

Ryou is WAY to nice for his own good, frankly if someone cut up my face and had plans on turning me into a permanent vegetable I'd be thanking Y. Bakura for taking care of the issue. The spirit was astoundingly obliging towards the boy’s position as well… First-rate Fic!